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Today is valentine day. My friend gived chocolate. But I don't like that friend so I didn't receive the chocolate. And my art, science, piano teacher gived chocolate. I liked chocolate but I gived chocolate to my class teacher. My teacher said "oh, chocolate!! I like chocolate. thank you." And I ate chocolate with my family and friends. It is very delicious. My family said "It is delicious." I want tomoroww is second valentine day.
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JOHN, It's good to hear that you had a wonderful Valentine's Day, but you should've took the chocolate that your friend was giving you even if you don't like him/her because he/she bought it for you. He/She spent some money for that chocolate, so it's better if you will appreciate his/her effort. :) PS: Don't forget to note the corrections below. :) ¢¾Teacher Beverly¢¾ ================================================================================================================================= Today is valentine day. >> Today is Valentine's Day. My friend gived chocolate. >> my friend gave me a chocolate. But I don't like that friend so I didn't receive the chocolate. >> But I didn't take the chocolate because I don't like him/her. ** Is your friend a girl or a boy? And my art, science, piano teacher gived chocolate. >> My Art, Science and Piano teachers also gave me some chocolates. I liked chocolate but I gived chocolate to my class teacher. >> I like chocolates but I gave one of my chocolates to my class teacher. My teacher said "oh, chocolate!! I like chocolate. thank you." >> My teacher said: "Oh, chocolate! I like chocolate. Thank you!" And I ate chocolate with my family and friends. >> I ate the chocolates with my family and friends. It is very delicious. >> CORRECT ^_^ My family said "It is delicious." >> My family also said that it's delicious. I want tomoroww is second valentine day. >> I want to have a second Valentine's Day tomorrow.