1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-02-19 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 busy day.....-o- 내 용 Today is so busy.11 o'clock,I'm want to library front of my house, next I want to maket named Dieso,I went to English library and at last,I want school library.I rented my books and my brother's books.Back to home,I'm read books,read new papers,study math,Korean and Chinese character and saw a English DVD.Oh,I'm so tired. I want sleep right now.Mom said today's diary write short.And I'll finish today's diary... good night. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-02-21 답변내용 Corrections: Today is so busy. ✔ Today was a busy day. 11 o'clock,I'm want to library front of my house, ✔ At 11 o'clock, I went to the library in front of my house. next I want to maket named Dieso,I went to English library and at last,I want school library. ✔ Next, I went to the market named Diego. ✔ I also went to an English library and school library too. I rented my books and my brother's books. = Correct Sentence Back to home,I'm read books,read new papers,study math,Korean and Chinese character and saw a English DVD. ✔ Back home,I'm read books, read the newspapers, studied math, Korean and Chinese character. ✔ Lastly, I saw an English DVD. Oh,I'm so tired. ✔ Oh, I'm so tired. I want sleep right now. ✔ I wanted to sleep now. Mom said today's diary write short.And I'll finish today's diary... good night. ✔ My mom said that today's diary was short. ✔ After I'm done with it, I went to bed. Goodnight!