1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-02-20 Weather    Feeling  Happy 제 목 Horse game!! 내 용 Today 8 o'clock,I'm playing horse game with my younger brother.I 'm a horse and my brother is horseman.He touch 1 time I'm walk slow,2 times I'm run fast and 3 times I'm jump. Oh..first fun,second fun, so fun!!!But finish the game,my knees are so~~~~~~~~~~~~hurt.My knees are red and white.Later,my back, arms and legs are so hurt,too!! Next time I think I'll play other games.We are danced, too.I'm wear skirt pajama, grey short stockings and pajama hat and my brother wear white cardigan,yellow skinny jeans and ballet shoes.My mother give me a special free time.I'm so happy.^O^ 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-02-22 답변내용 Corrections: Today 8 o'clock,I'm playing horse game with my younger brother. ✔ Today at around 8 o'clock, I'm played the horse game with my younger brother. I 'm a horse and my brother is horseman. ✔ I'm a horse and my brother is the horseman. He touch 1 time I'm walk slow,2 times I'm run fast and 3 times I'm jump. ✔ He touched me one time and I walked very slowly. ✔ He touched me twice and I ran fast and if it's thrice,I jump. Oh..first fun,second fun, so fun!!! ✔ It was so fun! But finish the game,my knees are so~~~~~~~~~~~~hurt. ✔ After the game ended and my knees got hurt. My knees are red and white. ✔ My knees were red and white. Later,my back, arms and legs are so hurt,too!! ✔ Later, my back, arms and legs were painful, too! Next time I think I'll play other games. ✔ Next time, I'll think of another game. We are danced, too. ✔ We danced too. I'm wear skirt pajama, grey short stockings and pajama hat and my brother wear white cardigan,yellow skinny jeans and ballet shoes. ✔ I wore skirt pajamas, grey short stockings and the pajama hat. ✔ My brother wore white cardigan, yellow skinny jeans and ballet shoes. My mother give me a special free time. ✔ My mother gave her special time with us. I'm so happy.^O^ = Correct Sentence