1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-02-24 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Colorful fairys {First Meeting} 내 용 This storys are about fairys and two girls's story. Girls's names are Elena and Vilina.Girls live in village name is Sweetlyna.Elen and Vilna is best friend. One day,Elen and Vilina going to the winter festival and there is girls and fairys first meeting place. Girls saw a sweets store.Elen said "Hey,Vilina!Look at thet the new sweets!Um...fairy suger? It look so delicious, isn't it?" "Oh,It's look like a fairy.I'll buy it!"answered Vilina. ---Girls in Vilina's room. "The fairy sugers are jelly!It is so soft..um but this is hard."said Elen.Girls tear the hard jelly."Ah!!! Whis is this?Possibly it is a...fairy?!"yelled girls togther. The fariy open her eyes."Where I am? I'm cookie fairy,delia. Who are you?"the fairy said. "I'm Elen and this is Vilina."answered girls.Sametime,the suddenly fairy succumb. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-02-26 답변내용 Corrections: This storys are about fairys and two girls's story. ✔ The story is about the fairies and the two girls. Girls's names are Elena and Vilina. ✔ The girl's names are Elena and Vilina. Girls live in village name is Sweetlyna.Elen and Vilna is best friend. ✔ The girls live in the village named "Sweetlyna". ✔ They are best of friends. One day,Elen and Vilina going to the winter festival and there is girls and fairys first meeting place. ✔ One day, Elen and Vilina went to the winter festival. ✔ The girls met the fairies. Girls saw a sweets store. ✔ The girls saw the sweet store. Elen said "Hey,Vilina! Look at thet the new sweets!Um...fairy suger? It look so delicious, isn't it?" ✔ Elen said "Hey,Vilina! Look at the sweets! Is a fairy sugar? It looks so delicious, isn't it?" "Oh,It's look like a fairy.I'll buy it!"answered Vilina. ✔ "Oh,it looks like a fairy. I'll buy it!" answered Vilina. ---Girls in Vilina's room. ✔ There are girls in Vilina's room. "The fairy sugers are jelly!It is so soft..um but this is hard."said Elen. ✔ "The fairy sugars are jelly! They are so soft and hard."said Elen. Girls tear the hard jelly. = Correct Sentence "Ah!!! Whis is this? Possibly it is a...fairy?!"yelled girls togther. ✔ "Ah! What is this? Could it be a fairy?" yelled girls togther. The fariy open her eyes."Where I am? I'm cookie fairy,delia. Who are you?"the fairy said. ✔ The fairy opened it's eyes and said, "Where am I? I'm cookie fairy, Delia. Who are you? "I'm Elen and this is Vilina."answered girls. ✔ "I'm Elen and this is Vilina." the girls answered. Sametime,the suddenly fairy succumb. ✔ The fairy suddenly succumb.