1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-02-26 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Colorful fairys {Adventure with Delia 내 용 Elen and Vilina look at the Delia."Oh,look at Delia Elen!She was so thin.I know why she was succumb."said VIlina."I think she must eat anything.How about cookie? She is a cookie fairy."said Elen." Great idea Elen!".Delia eating some cookies then she was wake up."I'm becom really week fairy now.Monster queen Mathi was took my powers.Plese help me Elen and Vilina!Plese."said Delia. "Um..but I and Elen was just little girl. How we help you?"said VIina."But,maybe we can help you,we'll becom your helper."said Elen."Okey,thank you so mach!!We must go to the fairy land.Go!"Delia shouted.Delia,VIlina and Elen went to the fairy land."Fallow me,we'll going to meet Acarina and Abovlika."said Delia."Who's Acarina and Abovlika?"asked girls. "The fairyland's queen and king.We finish the talk becase we arrival the place."said Delia. They meet queen and king. "Acarina and Abovlika,I have helpers.Elen and Vilina.Plese give magic fairy set?I think girls must have magic fairy set." request Delia.Then,fairys and girls heard monster queen's laughing voice. ****Magic fairy set:fairy wings,fairy dust,pendant,ring,fairy clothes and magic wand.Magic fairy things have magic power. Thing can use when danger situation or else situation. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-02-28 답변내용 Corrections: Elen and Vilina look at the Delia. ✔ Elen and Vilina looked at the Delia. "Oh,look at Delia Elen!She was so thin.I know why she was succumb."said VIlina. ✔ "Oh! Look at Delia, Elen! She was so thin.I know why she rolled herself like a ball."said Vilina. "I think she must eat anything. How about cookie? She is a cookie fairy."said Elen. ✔ "I think she must eat something. How about a cookie? She is a cookie fairy."said Elen. " Great idea Elen!". ✔ It's a great idea Vilina said. Delia eating some cookies then she was wake up. ✔ Delia ate some cookies and regained her strength. "I'm becom really week fairy now.Monster queen Mathi was took my powers.Plese help me Elen and Vilina!Plese."said Delia. ✔ "I become a really week fairy now. The monster, Queen Mathi took my powers. Please help me, Elen and Vilina! Please!" said Delia. "Um..but I and Elen was just little girl. How we help you?"said VIina. ✔ "Elen and I were just little girls. Ho could we help you?" said Vilina. "But,maybe we can help you,we'll becom your helper."said Elen. ✔ "Maybe we could help you, we'll become your helper." said Elen. "Okey,thank you so mach!!We must go to the fairy land.Go!"Delia shouted. ✔ "Okey,thank you so much! We must go to the fairy land. Go!" Delia shouted. Delia,VIlina and Elen went to the fairy land. ✔ Delia,Vilina and Elen went to the fairy land. "Fallow me,we'll going to meet Acarina and Abovlika."said Delia. ✔ "Follow me, we are going to meet Acarina and Abovlika." said Delia. "Who's Acarina and Abovlika?"asked girls. ✔ "Who's Acarina and Abovlika?" the girls asked. "The fairyland's queen and king.We finish the talk becase we arrival the place."said Delia. ✔ "We'll arrive in the fairy land's King and Queen." said Delia. They meet queen and king. ✔ They met the king and queen. "Acarina and Abovlika,I have helpers.Elen and Vilina.Plese give magic fairy set?I think girls must have magic fairy set." request Delia. ✔ "Acarina and Abovlika,I have helpers, Elen and Vilina. Plese give the magic fairy set. I think the girls must have magic the fairy set." Delia requested. Then,fairys and girls heard monster queen's laughing voice. ✔ The fairies and the girls heard the monster queen's laughing voice. ****Magic fairy set:fairy wings,fairy dust,pendant,ring,fairy clothes and magic wand. T✔ he magic fairy set includes the fairy wings, fairy dust, pendant, ring, fairy clothes and magic wand. Magic fairy things have magic power. ✔ The magic fairy things have the magic power. Thing can use when danger situation or else situation. ✔ The things can be use when in danger situation.