1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-03-04 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Colorful magic{new school} 내 용 "You become a notive fairy.Congratulations,girls!"said Delia. "But..but we are person.How we become fairy?"asked Elen. "You are the reall fairy's friends."answered Delia. "Here,thses books are magic book.Called "Charm book".Fairys must have this book."said Delia."Thank you,Delia.Delia,timorrow is we meet new school teacher.Elen and I the same class.You like follow us?" said Vilina."Oh,yeah.I like it.Don't do magic in school.Except really danger happen.Understand,girls?"said Delia."Okey,Delia.Let's sleep right now.Time is 11 :10 P.M.."said Vilina."Hey,how about me?I'm forgetting I call to my mom."said Elen."All right,Elen.My mom call to your mother.And today,you sleep my home.My mom take your bag.Don't worry.Just sleep."said Vilina."Good night everyone."mumbled Delia. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-03-05 답변내용 Corrections: "You become a notive fairy.Congratulations,girls!"said Delia. ✔ "You've become novice fairies. Congratulations, girls!" said Delia. "But..but we are person.How we become fairy?"asked Elen. ✔ "But we are people. How can we become fairies?" asked Elen. "You are the reall fairy's friends."answered Delia. ✔ "You are the really fairies friends" answered Delia. "Here,thses books are magic book.Called "Charm book".Fairys must have this book."said Delia. ✔ "Here,these books are magic books called "Charm books". Fairies must read these books" said Delia. "Thank you,Delia.Delia,timorrow is we meet new school teacher.Elen and I the same class.You like follow us?" said Vilina. ✔ "Thank you, Delia tomorrow we will meet the new school teacher. Elen and I have the same class. Will you follow us?" said Vilina. "Oh,yeah.I like it.Don't do magic in school.Except really danger happen.Understand,girls?"said Delia. ✔ "Oh,yeah! I like it. Don't do magic in school. Except, if there's really danger happening. Do you understand, girls?" said Delia. "Okey,Delia.Let's sleep right now.Time is 11 :10 P.M.."said Vilina. ✔ "Okey, Delia let's sleep right now. The time is around 11:10p.m." said Vilina. "Hey,how about me?I'm forgetting I call to my mom."said Elen. ✔ "Hey, how about me? I'm forget to call my mom" said Elen. "All right,Elen.My mom call to your mother.And today,you sleep my home.My mom take your bag.Don't worry.Just sleep."said Vilina. ✔ "All right, Elen! My mom called your mother. Today, you could sleep in my home. My mom took your bag. Don't worry, just sleep" said Vilina. "Good night everyone."mumbled Delia. ✔ "Good night everyone" Delia mumbled.