1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-03-05 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Colorful magic{Danger in school} 내 용 "Hi,Sphia.We're the same class!Yey!!"said Vilina."How about my new school uniform?Gorise.said Elen.Class room is so noisy.Suddenly,new teacher come into the class."Slice,class!My name is Grjina Combaye Runasn.You call me Miss.Runa or Runas.I'm calling to your name.Gorise!,Sphia,Makeni,Vilina,Elen..."shouted Runas."Runas is so scary.I'm afrid the 5th gread.Hou about you Elen?"wispered Vilina."I scary too.Delia,look at Runas.She look like a monster's queen."wispered Elen."Yeah,she really look like a monster's queen.Guys,look out everything in school.I'm feeling so strange."wispered Delia."Miss.Runa.I have a question.You know who is the king and queen in the fairy land?"asked Elen. "It's little stupid question.King is the Abovelika and queen is the Acarina."answered Miss.Runa."You know that!You read fairy fantasy called "Neli with fairys"!"said Elen."Um...um..ye..yes!! I reading it.The ather is very good person.I think." Elen sit down."Delia.She know.I think she really monster's queen.She know queen and king and she said reading a my creative story.I'm not pubilcation."said Elen. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-03-05 답변내용 Corrections: "Hi,Sphia.We're the same class!Yey!!"said Vilina. ✔ "Hi, Sophia we're in the same class! Yey!" said Vilina. "How about my new school uniform?Gorise.said Elen. ✔ "How about my new school uniform? Gorise" said Elen. Class room is so noisy. ✔ The classroom is so noisy. Suddenly,new teacher come into the class. ✔ Suddenly, new teacher come into the class. "Slice,class!My name is Grjina Combaye Runasn.You call me Miss.Runa or Runas.I'm calling to your name.Gorise!,Sphia,Makeni,Vilina,Elen..."shouted Runas. ✔ "Slice, class! My name is Grjina Combaye Runasn. You can call me Miss Runa or Runas.Let's have the headcount. Gorise!, Sophia, Makeni, Vilina, Elen..." shouted Runas. "Runas is so scary.I'm afrid the 5th gread.Hou about you Elen?"wispered Vilina. ✔ "Runas is so scary. I'm afraid the 5th graders. How about you Elen?" wisphered Vilina. "I scary too.Delia,look at Runas.She look like a monster's queen."wispered Elen. ✔ "I scared too. Delia,look at Runas. She looks like the monster's queen" whispered Elen. "Yeah,she really look like a monster's queen.Guys,look out everything in school.I'm feeling so strange."wispered Delia. ✔ "Yeah, she really looks like the monster's queen. Guys,look out everything in school.It feels so strange." whispered Delia. "Miss.Runa.I have a question.You know who is the king and queen in the fairy land?"asked Elen. ✔ "Miss Runa, I have a question.Do you know who is the king and queen in the fairy land?" asked Elen. "It's little stupid question.King is the Abovelika and queen is the Acarina."answered Miss.Runa. ✔ "It's a little stupid question. The king is Abovelika and the queen is the Acarina" answered Miss Runa. "You know that!You read fairy fantasy called "Neli with fairys"!"said Elen. ✔ "You know that! You read the fairy fantasy called Neli with fairys!" said Elen. "Um...um..ye..yes!! I reading it.The ather is very good person.I think." Elen sit down. ✔ "Um...um..ye..yes! I read it. The author is a very good person, I think." Elen sit down. "Delia.She know.I think she really monster's queen.She know queen and king and she said reading a my creative story.I'm not pubilcation."said Elen. ✔ "Delia, she knows it. I think she's really the monster's queen. She knows the queen and king. She said while reading a creative story. I didn't publish it" said Elen.