1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-03-08 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Colorful magic {Prinsess Rose} 내 용 "Hey,Runas charm the magic.See?"wispered Vilina."The fairy magic save the earth from the evil things power!" chanting charm the Elen."Elen!Why you chating charm?"asked Delia."Runas being horrid and I"m just shut this horrid thing."said Elen. "Go to my home,guys.Let's go and learn the magics."said Vilina. ----In Vilina's room. "Weather is snowing.Beatyfull..What's that sound?It's a bell sound?"said Rose."See!It's a Miss.Runas!Why she visit my home?"shouted Vilina.Miss.Runas come in."Hi,student."said Runas. "Hellow,Miss.Runas."said girls."I want to give you this thing."said Runas and reach the hand.Runa's hand have some sweets."Thank you,Runas.We'll enjoy it."said Elen."Oh,I'm late,girls.See you!"said Runas."Hey,why Runas give that suddn?I'm check this with fairy magic."Elen said.Elen check,suddnly Elen scream."What happen?"asked Delia."Delia,Rose and Vilina.Look at that."said girls.All girls are screaming. "Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa!OOOOOOOOh!Omg,omg,omg!!!!! 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-03-12 답변내용 Corrections: "Hey,Runas charm the magic.See?"wispered Vilina. ✔ "Hey, Runas casted the magic spell, see?" Vilina whispered. "The fairy magic save the earth from the evil things power!" chanting charm the Elen. ✔ "The fairy magic save the earth from the evil power!" Elen chanted. "Elen!Why you chating charm?"asked Delia. ✔ "Elen! Why did you cast the spell?" Delia asked. "Runas being horrid and I"m just shut this horrid thing."said Elen. ✔ "Runas is being horrid and I just have to shut her horrid thing," Elen said. "Go to my home,guys.Let's go and learn the magics."said Vilina. ✔ "Go to my house, guys. Let's go and learn the spells" said Vilina. ----In Vilina's room. "Weather is snowing.Beatyfull..What's that sound?It's a bell sound?"said Rose. ✔ "It's a beautiful, snowy day. What's that sound? Is it the sound of the bell?" Rose said. "See!It's a Miss.Runas!Why she visit my home?"shouted Vilina. ✔ "See! It's Miss Runas! Why did she visit my home?" Vilina shouted. Miss.Runas come in."Hi,student."said Runas. ✔ Miss Runas came inside the house. "Hi students," Runas said . "Hellow,Miss.Runas."said girls. ✔ "Hello Miss Runas," girls said. "I want to give you this thing."said Runas and reach the hand. ✔ "I want to give you this thing," Runas said. She opened her palm. Runa's hand have some sweets. ✔ There are some sweets. "Thank you,Runas.We'll enjoy it."said Elen. ✔ "Thank you,Runas. We'll enjoy it," Elen said. "Oh,I'm late,girls.See you!"said Runas. ✔ "Oh! I'm late girls, see you!" Runas said. "Hey,why Runas give that suddn?I'm check this with fairy magic."Elen said ✔ "Hey! Why did Runas give us sweets all of the sudden? I'll check it with fairy magic," Elen said. Elen check,suddnly Elen scream. ✔ Elen checked it and screamed. "What happen?"asked Delia. ✔ "What happened?" Delia asked. "Delia,Rose and Vilina.Look at that."said girls. ✔ "Delia, Rose and Vilina! Look at that," Elen said. All girls are screaming. "Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa!OOOOOOOOh!Omg,omg,omg!!!!! ✔ "Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa!OOOOOOOOh!Omg,omg,omg!!!!!," the girls screamed.