1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-03-09 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Colorful magic{Attack teacher} 내 용 "Is this a fairy poison.A reall strong poison!"said Delia. "Your anticipation is right!Runas is monster queen Mathi.How we attack my teacher?"said Vilina."I think we must go to fairy land. We'll meet Acarina and Abovlika."suggest Elen."Um..okey.But just a minute.We learn more magics.Your magics are basic."said Delia."All right,Delia.We will."said girls. ------Meet fairy king and queen. "Acarina and Abovlika,we are in danger.Elen and my teacher is monster queen Mathi."said Vilina.Elen stand side to the Yela. Yela is little elf."Elen,your teacher is reall Mathi?asked Yela. Yeah.Mathi is my 5th gread teacher.My feeling is werse."said Elen."Elen,I want to give you this.It's a magic diamond key."wispered Yela."Eh?You give it to me?Why?"asked Elen. "You are in danger and you are my reall friend.I hope this key help your strategy."answered Yela."Oh.s..so than..thank you,Yela. I'll must save the world with my friends and you!"cried Elen. "Elen!Come on,we'll go back."said Delia."All right,Yela,so thank you and I love you.Your my elf best frend.See you later.You are excellent elf and friend."said Elen."Good bye.I love you too.Your excellent girl."said Yela. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-03-12 답변내용 Corrections: "Is this a fairy poison.A reall strong poison!"said Delia. ✔ "Is this a fairy poison. A real strong poison!" Delia said. "Your anticipation is right!Runas is monster queen Mathi.How we attack my teacher?"said Vilina. ✔ "Your anticipation is right! Runas is the monster queen Mathi. How are we going to we attack the teacher?" Vilina said. "I think we must go to fairy land. We'll meet Acarina and Abovlika."suggest Elen. ✔ "I think we must go to fairy land. We'll meet Acarina and Abovlika," Elen suggested. "Um..okey.But just a minute.We learn more magics.Your magics are basic."said Delia. ✔ "Um... Okey, but just a minute. We have to learn more spells. Your magic spells are basic," Delia said. "All right,Delia.We will."said girls. ✔ "Alright Delia, we will," girls said. ------Meet fairy king and queen. ✔ The girls met the fairy king and queen. "Acarina and Abovlika,we are in danger.Elen and my teacher is monster queen Mathi."said Vilina. ✔ "Acarina and Abovlika, we are in danger. Our teacher is the monster queen Mathi," Vilina said. Elen stand side to the Yela. Yela is little elf. ✔ Elen stood beside Yela. Yela is little elf. "Elen,your teacher is reall Mathi?asked Yela. ✔ "Elen, is your teacher the real Mathi? Yela asked. Yeah.Mathi is my 5th gread teacher.My feeling is werse."said Elen. ✔ "Yeah! Mathi is my 5th grade teacher. My feeling worsen up," Elen said. "Elen,I want to give you this.It's a magic diamond key."wispered Yela. ✔ "Elen,I want to give you this.It's the magic diamond key," whispered Yela. "Eh?You give it to me?Why?"asked Elen. ✔ "Eh? Why did you give it yo me?" Elen asked. "You are in danger and you are my reall friend.I hope this key help your strategy."answered Yela. ✔ "You are in danger and you are my real friend. I hope this key could help you to make a strategy," Yela answered. "Oh.s..so than..thank you,Yela. I'll must save the world with my friends and you!"cried Elen. ✔ "Oh! Thank you, Yela. I must save the world with my friends and you!" Elen cried. "Elen!Come on,we'll go back."said Delia. ✔ "Elen! Come on, we'll go back," Delia said. "All right,Yela,so thank you and I love you.Your my elf best frend.See you later.You are excellent elf and friend."said Elen. ✔"Alright Yela, thank you and I love you. Your my best friend elf. See you later! You are an excellent elf and a friend," Elen said. "Good bye.I love you too.Your excellent girl."said Yela. ✔ "Good bye! I love you too. You're an excellent girl," Yela said.