1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-03-10 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Colorful magic{save Elen} 내 용 "My feel is good."said Vilina."Why?You have any good news?"asked Delia."No.But my feeling is just good."said Vilina. "Elen,what is that key?It's so~~~pretty and beautyful!."said Vilina."Um..it's just my present from...from..my friends."answed Elen."Wow,your friends is so rich."said Vilina. "That key feeling fairy magic.Elen,said trueth."said Delia. "I said..whew...okey.Little elf Yela give it to me."said Elen. "Hey,you are so luky,I want that key,too."said Vilina. "Witchs are attack you.But that key save you."Delia. "Oh....so luky!! I'm so luky."said Elen. "Ah!You look out your teacher.Your teacher want your key."said Delia. "Recolabolative!Hey,Vilina.Here the key.But it's sham key."said Elen.Than,she gave the key to Vilina. "Oh...thank you so much.You are my reall best friend.said Vilina. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-03-12 답변내용 Corrections: "My feel is good."said Vilina. ✔ "I feel good" Vilina said. "Why?You have any good news?"asked Delia. ✔ "Why? Do you have any good news?" Delia asked. "No.But my feeling is just good."said Vilina. ✔ "No, I just feel good," Vilina said. "Elen,what is that key?It's so~~~pretty and beautyful!."said Vilina. ✔ "Elen, what is that key? It's so beautiful!" Vilina said. "Um..it's just my present from...from..my friends."answed Elen. ✔ "Umm... It's just a present from my friends, " Elen answered. "Wow,your friends is so rich."said Vilina. ✔ "Wow! Your friends are so rich," Vilina said. "That key feeling fairy magic.Elen,said trueth."said Delia. ✔ "The key feeling of the fairy magic. Elen said the truth," Delia said. "I said..whew...okey.Little elf Yela give it to me."said Elen. ✔ "I said..whew...okey. Little elf Yela gave it to me," Elen said. "Hey,you are so luky,I want that key,too."said Vilina. ✔ "Hey, you are so lucky,I want that key, too," Vilina said. "Witchs are attack you.But that key save you."Delia. ✔ "Witches attacked you, but the key saved you," Delia said. "Oh....so luky!! I'm so luky."said Elen. ✔ "Oh....so lucky! I'm so lucky," Elen said. "Ah!You look out your teacher.Your teacher want your key."said Delia. ✔ "Ah! You look at your teacher. Your teacher wants your key," Delia said. "Recolabolative!Hey,Vilina. Here the key.But it's sham key."said Elen ✔ "Recolabolative! Hey Vilina, here's the key, it's the sham's key," Elen said. .Than,she gave the key to Vilina. "Oh...thank you so much.You are my reall best friend.said Vilina. ✔ She gave the key to Vilina. "Oh! Thank you so much. You are really my best friend," Vilina said.