1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2013-03-12 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Story diary-6 Ollo's Rhinobeetle vs Cham's Stag beetle 내 용 There is a boy named Ollo. He made a rhino beetle with OLLO. And there is a Insects OLLO robot fighting. Then Ollo is there. He is fight with Cham's Stag beetle. And there is a friend also. He's name is Ado. The game has start! First, Ollo's beetle's name is Beetle. And another is Stang. The Beetle is remote operation. The Stang push the Beetle. But Beetle jump and Stang is got afried. The Beetle push little. And the Beetle won. Because the Stang has fell. The next game is Ado's Bees vs Chong's Spider. 답변자 tc0092 답변일 2013-03-12 답변내용 There is a boy named Ollo. >> no correction ^^ He made a rhino beetle with OLLO. >> no correction ^^ And there is a Insects OLLO robot fighting. >> There was an insect fighting with Ollo's robot. Then Ollo is there. >> Then, Ollo came. He is fight with Cham's Stag beetle. >> He fought with Cham's Stag beetle. And there is a friend also. >> There was a friend, too. He's name is Ado. >> no correction ^^ The game has start! >> The game has started! First, Ollo's beetle's name is Beetle. >> no correction ^^ And another is Stang. >> The other one is named, Stang. The Beetle is remote operation. >> Beetle is a remote-operated robot. The Stang push the Beetle. >> The Stang pushed the Beetle. But Beetle jump and Stang is got afried. >> However, Beetle jumped and Stang got afraid. The Beetle push little. >> Beetle pushed a little. And the Beetle won. >> Beetle won! Because the Stang has fell. >> It was because Stang fell. The next game is Ado's Bees vs Chong's Spider. >> The next game will be Ado's Bees vs Chong's Spider. Dear Joo-young, Please, be careful in using conjunctions at the start of your sentences. Teacher Ann ✿◠‿◠✿