1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-03-12 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Colorful magic{Snack trickery} 내 용 "Hi,Elen.Can I go to your house finish the school today?"asked Vilina."Of course you can.My mom bought delicous snacks.You want snacks too,Delia?Oh,your feel bad?Your face is not so good."said Elen."Ah...I'm fine.Um...hey guys,today come your house another fairy called Happne the smiley fairy."said Delia. "Really?Oh..I'm so exciting.I want meet Happen right now!!"said Vilina.Suddnly Rose come to girls."Hi,guys.You listen Happne can charm smail forever and she can charm correct the smail forever magic."said Rose."She was amazing.How about you,Deila?What is your magic?"asked Elen."I can make anyone become a cookie and I can correct the become cookie magic too."said Delia. "Wow,your amazing too!I want I'm good at magic."said Vilina. --------------Finish the school,girls go to Elen's house. "You want some chocolate marshmallow pie?Rose,Vilina and Delia?It's delious."said Elen."Yes,please.No,thanks,Yes,please."said Rose,Vilina and Delia. "Hi,guys...I'm Happne.Nice to meet you."said Happne."You are new fairy the Happen!Nice to meet you,too."said Vilina and Elen. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-03-13 답변내용 Corrections: "Hi,Elen.Can I go to your house finish the school today?"asked Vilina." ✔ "Hi Elen, can I go to your house after school today?" Vilina asked. "Of course you can.My mom bought delicous snacks.You want snacks too,Delia?Oh,your feel bad?Your face is not so good."said Elen. ✔ "Of course you can. My mom bought delicous snacks. Do you want snacks too, Delia? Oh, do you feel bad? Your face is not so good," Elen said. "Ah...I'm fine.Um...hey guys,today come your house another fairy called Happne the smiley fairy."said Delia. ✔ "Ah! I'm fine. Umm...hey guys, today, another fairy will come to your house, she is Happne, the smiley fairy," Delia said. "Really?Oh..I'm so exciting.I want meet Happen right now!!"said Vilina. ✔ "Really? Oh! I'm so excited. I wanted meet Happne right now!" Vilina said. Suddnly Rose come to girls. ✔ Suddenly, Rose appeared infront of the girls. "Hi,guys.You listen Happne can charm smail forever and she can charm correct the smail forever magic."said Rose ✔ "Hi guys, listen to Happne, she can cast spells forever," Rose said. ."She was amazing.How about you,Deila?What is your magic?"asked Elen. ✔ "She's amazing. How about you Delia, what's your magic?" Elen asked. "I can make anyone become a cookie and I can correct the become cookie magic too."said Delia. ✔ "I can make anyone become a cookie and I can correct them by becoming a cookie," Delia said. "Wow,your amazing too!I want I'm good at magic."said Vilina. ✔ "Wow! You're amazing too!I want I'm good at magic."said Vilina. --------------Finish the school,girls go to Elen's house. ✔ After school, the girls went to Elen's house. "You want some chocolate marshmallow pie?Rose,Vilina and Delia?It's delious."said Elen. ✔ "Do you want some chocolate marshmallow pie Rose,Vilina and Delia? It's delious," Elen said. "Yes,please.No,thanks,Yes,please."said Rose,Vilina and Delia. ✔ Rose and Delia agreed and Vilina said no with it. "Hi,guys...I'm Happne.Nice to meet you."said Happne. ✔ "Hi guys, I'm Happne. Nice to meet you," Happne said. "You are new fairy the Happen!Nice to meet you,too."said Vilina and Elen. ✔ "You are the new fairy the Happne! Nice to meet you too," Vilina and Elen said.