1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-03-13 Weather    Feeling  Happy 제 목 Colorful magic{Hi,Happne!} 내 용 "Do you want some chocolate marshmallow pie,Happne?"asked Elen. "Oh,yeah.I love marshmallow."said Elen."Um...Delia and Happne.You stay my home or Elen's home?"asked Vilina."I have a idea.Here two paper.Choose one,Vilina."said Elen."My paper said Delia."said Vilina."I'm Happne.Same times,Elen's mom called Vilina."Vilina,time to go your home~!"said Elen's mom. "Oh,I'm late.Come on Delia.See you tomorrow Rose,Elen and Happne."said Vilina."Delia?Happne?Who is this girls?"said Elen's mom."Ah,mom.It's just..just..doll's name!I chaged my doll's name."lied Elen."All right.Hurry up,VIlina.Your mom's come!"said Elen's mom."Happne,this is your house.It's a Doll house.This doll house have bed,food,sofa,horse,bath room and even TV."explaned Elen."I love this house.Thank you so much,Elen."said Vilina."Elen,sleep now.Bed time!"said Elen's mom."Okey,mom.She was my mom and her name is Cristal S. Cresen."said Elen."Your mom's name is so pretty.I'm so tired.Good night,Elen.said Happne."Good night,Happne..."said Elen.And Elen and Happne sleep. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-03-14 답변내용 Corrections: "Do you want some chocolate marshmallow pie,Happne?"asked Elen. ✔ "Do you want some chocolate marshmallow pie, Happne?" Elen asked. "Oh,yeah.I love marshmallow."said Elen. ✔ "Oh!yeah, I love marshmallow," Elen said. "Um...Delia and Happne.You stay my home or Elen's home?"asked Vilina. ✔ Umm...Delia and Happne, do you want to in my home or Elen's home?" Vilina asked. "I have a idea.Here two paper.Choose one,Vilina."said Elen. ✔ "I have a idea. Here are the two papers. Choose one, Vilina," Elen said. "My paper said Delia."said Vilina. ✔ "Where's my paper Delia?" Vilina said. "I'm Happne.Same times,Elen's mom called Vilina. ✔ "I'm Happne," Happne said to Elen's mom. "Vilina,time to go your home~!"said Elen's mom. ✔ "Vilina, time to go home!" Elen's mom said. "Oh,I'm late.Come on Delia.See you tomorrow Rose,Elen and Happne."said Vilina. ✔ "Oh,I'm late. Come on Delia, see you tomorrow Rose,Elen and Happne," Vilina said. "Delia?Happne?Who is this girls?"said Elen's mom. ✔ "Delia? Happne? Who are those girls?" Elen's mom said. "Ah,mom.It's just..just..doll's name!I chaged my doll's name."lied Elen. ✔ "Ah,mom! It's just dolls name! I changed my dolls name." Elen lied. "All right.Hurry up,VIlina.Your mom's come!"said Elen's mom. ✔ "Alright! Hurry up, VIlina, your mom is here!" Elen's mom said. "Happne,this is your house.It's a Doll house. This doll house have bed,food,sofa,horse,bath room and even TV."explaned Elen. ✔ "Happne, this is your house.It's a doll's house. It has a bed, food, sofa, horse, bathroom and even TV," Elen explained. "I love this house.Thank you so much,Elen."said Vilina. ✔ "I love this house.Thank you so much, Elen," Vilina said. "Elen,sleep now.Bed time!"said Elen's mom. ✔ "Elen, sleep now, It's time to go to bed!" Elen's mom said. "Okey,mom.She was my mom and her name is Cristal S. Cresen."said Elen. ✔ "Okey, mom. She's my mom and her name is Cristal S. Cresen," Elen said. "Your mom's name is so pretty.I'm so tired.Good night,Elen.said Happne. ✔ "Your mom's name is so pretty.I'm so tired. Good night, Elen" Happne said. "Good night,Happne..."said Elen. ✔ "Good night, Happne" Elen said. And Elen and Happne sleep. ✔ Elen and Happne sleep.