1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-03-14 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Colorful magic {I like sweet!} 내 용 "Elen,do you want some icecream finish the school?"Vilina asked. "Icecream,yeah that's not bad.I'm eat sweet things sometimes.Happne,what is your favorite icecream?"Elen said. "My favorite?Um...pistachio,strawberry chocolate ,chocolate fudgy and peach ice!"Happne said."You like sweet things?"Elen asked."Yeah.Oh,where is Delia?"Happne asked. "I'm here.Vilina's poket have a lot of treats!Ah,sorry Vilina.But I love treats."Delia said."All right,Delia.But you eat cream bong-bong?"Vilina said Vilina."Cream bong-bong?The cream in the chocolate?"Delia asked."Yes.Bong-bong is my favorite and it's too expencive!5 bong-bong is 1dollar 2cent!"Vilina shouted."I think she ate your bong-bong."Elen said. "Sorry.I ate them.But I give you 2 dollar."Delia said. "All right.But next time happen same thing..I will so angry to you."Vilina said."Hey,now we go to icecream store "Cherry jubilee"Elen and Happne shouted. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-03-15 답변내용 Corrections: "Elen,do you want some icecream finish the school?"Vilina asked. ✔ "Elen, do you want some icecream after school?"Vilina asked. "Icecream,yeah that's not bad.I'm eat sweet things sometimes.Happne,what is your favorite icecream?"Elen said. ✔ "Icecream, yeah that's not bad.I sometimes eat sweets. Happne, what is your favorite icecream?"Elen said. "My favorite?Um...pistachio,strawberry chocolate ,chocolate fudgy and peach ice!"Happne said. ✔ "My favorite? Um...pistachio, strawberry chocolate, chocolate fudge and peach icecream!"Happne said. "You like sweet things?"Elen asked. ✔ "Do you like sweet things?"Elen asked. "Yeah.Oh,where is Delia?"Happne asked. = Correct "I'm here.Vilina's poket have a lot of treats!Ah,sorry Vilina.But I love treats."Delia said. ✔ "I'm here. Vilina's pocket have a lot of treats! Ah,sorry Vilina. I love treats," Delia said. "All right,Delia.But you eat cream bong-bong?"Vilina said Vilina. ✔ "Alright, Delia do you eat the Bong-bong icecream?" Vilina said. "Cream bong-bong?The cream in the chocolate?"Delia asked. ✔ "Do you like the Bong-bong icecream or the The icecream chocolate?" Delia asked. "Yes.Bong-bong is my favorite and it's too expencive!5 bong-bong is 1dollar 2cent!"Vilina shouted. ✔ "Yes! Bong-bong icecream is my favorite and it's too expensive! 5 Bong-bong icecream is a dollar and 2 cents!"Vilina shouted." "I think she ate your bong-bong."Elen said. ✔ "I think she ate your bong-bong icecream."Elen said. "Sorry.I ate them.But I give you 2 dollar."Delia said. ✔ "Sorry.I ate them. I'll give you 2 dollars," Delia said. "All right.But next time happen same thing..I will so angry to you."Vilina said. ✔ "Alright! Next time it happens again, I'll be very angry to you." Vilina said. "Hey,now we go to icecream store "Cherry jubilee"Elen and Happne shouted. ✔ "Hey, we could go to the icecream store "Cherry jubilee," Elen and Happne shouted.