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Debate competition
2019-04-12
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start of the week
2019-04-08
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cold and caugh
2019-04-05
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planning to make a new club
2019-03-25
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concerning
2019-03-14
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I want more time
2019-03-08
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Be thankful for all i've got now
2018-08-03
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my own credit card
2018-07-31
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After the field trip
2017-05-17
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Field trip
2017-05-16
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Corrections: "Eh?What's that soun...aah!!What's these sweet,sticky and gooey thing?No,no,no!Sweet things make me melt...." Mathi shouted. ✔ "Eh? What's that sound aah! What's this sweet, sticky and spongy thing? No,no,no! Sweet things make me melt...." Mathi shouted. "Yes!Now,monster queen Mathi is gone.We can go to fairy land!But..before than,we have Vilina's party.It's 6:13.Hurry up,guys." Eeln said. ✔ "Yes! Now, monster Queen Mathi is gone. We can go to the fairy land!But, before that we have to go to Vilina's party first. It's 6:13. Hurry up, guys," Elen said. ------Become 9:21. ✔ It's 9:21. "Elen,where..where are y..y..you? I want..I want spend time with Elen!"sobed Vilina. ✔ "Elen, where..where are y..y..you? I want..I want spend time with Elen!" Vilina sobbed. "Don't worry,Vilina.Look at that!It said 'Happy birthday,Vilina.from Elen,Delia and Happne.'it's for you."said Vilina's mom. ✔ "Don't worry, Vilina. Look at that! It says 'Happy birthday, Vilina from Elen, Delia and Happne,' it's for you," Vilina's mom said. Vilina go to the party place,Elen,Delia and Happne was there. ✔ Vilina go to the party and see Elen,Delia and Happne there. "Surprise!!! Happy birthday,Vilina!'said her friends. ✔ "Surprise! Happy birthday, Vilina!" her friends said. "Elen,Delia and Happne!Thank you so much.How about Mathi?Magic pendant said,Mathi is coming."Vilina asked. ✔ "Elen, Delia and Happne! Thank you so much. How about Mathi? The magic pendant said Mathi is coming," Vilina asked. "Mathi is gone.We melting Mathi.Now,we can go fairy land!"said Delia. ✔ "Mathi is gone. We melted her up. Now, we can all go to the fairy land!" Delia said. "What a good news!Friends,this surpries party is really great.I love this party.You are my reall best friend."said Vilina. ✔ "That's good news! Friends, this surprise party is really great. I love this party. You are my really best friend," Vilina said. "Hey,go to fairy land right now!I want tell good news to Akarina and Abovlika."said Happne. ✔ "Hey, let's go to fairy land right now! I want tell the good news to Akarina and Abovlika," Happne said. Girls go to fairy land. ✔ The girls go to the fairy land. But behind,a women look at them and said "See you soon..silly.". ✔ Behind them is a woman gazing at them while saying "See you soon..silly."