1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-03-20 Weather    Feeling  Happy 제 목 Colorful magic(go tp fairy land) 내 용 "Delia,go to fairy land right now!"Elen said. "Okey.I see,go to fairy land."Delia said. Happen,Elen,Delia and Vilina went fairy land. "Fairy queen and king.I'm so glad to see you again."Deblia and Happn said. "Fairs and elfs,become happy.We're heros are win. We'll have big party for we're heros."king said. ———girls time to go home. "I'm so happy travail with you.Now new fairy travail with you."Delia and Happne said."Thank you.I don't forget you forever.We go to our house,bye..See you later."Elen and Vilina said. Girls went to home."Who is new fairy?I want know that."said Elen. "Mee too!"Vilina said 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-03-21 답변내용 Corrections: "Delia,go to fairy land right now!"Elen said. = Correct "Okey.I see,go to fairy land."Delia said. ✔ "Okey.I will go to fairy land,"Delia said. Happen,Elen,Delia and Vilina went fairy land. ✔ Happne, Elen, Delia and Vilina went to the fairy land. "Fairy queen and king.I'm so glad to see you again."Deblia and Happn said. ✔ "My Fairy Queen and King, I'm so glad to see you again," Delia and Happne said. "Fairs and elfs,become happy.We're heros are win. We'll have big party for we're heros."king said. ✔ "Fairies and elves, be happy. Our heroes had won. We'll have a big party for our heroes," the king said. ———girls time to go home. ✔ The girls went home. "I'm so happy travail with you.Now new fairy travail with you."Delia and Happne said. ✔ "I'm so happy to travel with you. Now, the new fairy for travel is with you," Delia and Happne said. "Thank you.I don't forget you forever.We go to our house,bye..See you later."Elen and Vilina said. ✔ "Thank you, I will never forget you. We will go to our house, bye! See you later," Elen and Vilina said. Girls went to home. = Correct Sentence "Who is new fairy?I want know that."said Elen. ✔ "Who is the new fairy? I want to know that." Elen said. "Mee too!"Vilina said = Correct