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Debate competition
2019-04-12
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start of the week
2019-04-08
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cold and caugh
2019-04-05
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planning to make a new club
2019-03-25
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concerning
2019-03-14
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I want more time
2019-03-08
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Be thankful for all i've got now
2018-08-03
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my own credit card
2018-07-31
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After the field trip
2017-05-17
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Field trip
2017-05-16
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"Girls,wake up!"who shouted at Elen and Vilina. "Oh,mom.Today is Saturday.I want sleep..!Who are you?"Vilina said."Eh?What happen?Ah,you are the flower fairy named Floa!"Elen said."Yes,I'm Floa.I'm glad to meet you again.I'm the your new fairy!"Floa said."We are glad to meet you,too."said girls."Elen,you have elf's diamond key.Isn't it?"Floa said. "Yeah.But how you know this secret?"asked Elen. "Because I'm t..t..the f..airy."answered Floa. "But why Delia and Happne dosen't?They can't future prophecy."Vilina said.Sametime,other fairy came into Vilina's room."Hey,Elen and Vilina!Oooo!Come here girls!You...Rukas,why you torment to my friends and fairys?Abracakabra,go a way you stupid lazy thing."Floa chanting charm. "Kastropolos,happy and peace on fairy land and all over the world!"Elen and Vilina chanting charm. "No,no,see you later..sily fairy!"scremed Rukas.
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Corrections: "Girls,wake up!"who shouted at Elen and Vilina. ✔ "Girls, wake up!" someone shouted at Elen and Vilina. "Oh,mom.Today is Saturday.I want sleep..!Who are you?"Vilina said. ✔ "Oh,mom today is Saturday.I want sleep..! Who are you?" Vilina said. "Eh?What happen?Ah,you are the flower fairy named Floa!"Elen said. ✔ "Eh? What happened? Ah, you are the flower fairy named Floa?!" Elen said. "Yes,I'm Floa.I'm glad to meet you again.I'm the your new fairy!"Floa said. ✔ "Yes,I'm Floa.I'm glad to meet you again.I'm the new fairy!" Floa said. "We are glad to meet you,too."said girls. ✔ "We are glad to meet you,too," girls said. "Elen,you have elf's diamond key.Isn't it?"Floa said. ✔ "Elen, you have an elf's diamond key, isn't it?"Floa said. "Yeah.But how you know this secret?"asked Elen. ✔ "Yeah, but how did you know this secret?" Elen asked. "Because I'm t..t..the f..airy."answered Floa. ✔ "Because, I'm t..t..the f..airy," Floa answered. "But why Delia and Happne dosen't?They can't future prophecy."Vilina said. ✔ "But why Delia and Happne aren't here? They can't prophesies the futurem," Vilina said. Sametime,other fairy came into Vilina's room. ✔ At the same time, another fairy came into Vilina's room. "Hey,Elen and Vilina!Oooo!Come here girls!You...Rukas,why you torment to my friends and fairys?Abracakabra,go a way you stupid lazy thing."Floa chanting charm. ✔ "Hey,Elen and Vilina! Ooooh! Come here girls! You, Rukas,why are you tormenting my friends and fairies? Abracadabra, go away you stupid lazy thing," Floa chanted. "Kastropolos,happy and peace on fairy land and all over the world!"Elen and Vilina chanting charm. ✔ "Kastropolos, happy and peace on the fairy land and all over the world!"Elen and Vilina chanted. "No,no,see you later..sily fairy!"scremed Rukas. ✔ "No, no, see you later..sily fairy!" Rukas screamed.