1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-03-23 Weather    Feeling  Happy 제 목 Colorful magic{peaceful forever} 내 용 "You see?I think Rukas have..have.."Elen mumbled. "Rukas what?I didn't see anything about Rukas."Vilina answered."Maybe you..see the brightest light?"Floa said. "Yes,I did!You too?I think in old days,she was good and nice elf."Elen said."I know,tell the truth,she was very beautyful,kindful and excellent elf.Everyone love her.Her reall name is Kindina B. Excellen.Even queen and king love her."Floa explained."Oh..We are understand,but why she become evilest thing?"Elen and Vilina asked."Because she caught evil things.That time,we have war with monsters. They make Kindina become evil."Floa said. "Go!I want meet Ruka..Kindina right now!"shouted Vilina. "Why?You want covenant to Kindina?!"Elen said. "Yes,I am.Than I'll make her return to Kindina."Vilina said. "Okey,alright.Go,go right now!"Floa shouted. ==========They met Rukas(Kindina). "Rukas,I want covenant with you.Okey?"Vilina said. "Okey,you little fairy.What is your covenant?"Rukas asked. "Um..I heared in the old day,you are the elf."Vilina said. "Yeah!Why?I'm so sad about that!"shouted Rukas. "Why you sad about that?Can I hear about your story?"Vilina said softly."In old days..when I'm the elf,I'm so happy.But one day someone took me the evil way.And I become evil.I..I..want go back in old day when I'm elf..Kindina."Rukas whined. "I'll help you with my fairy and elf friends."Vilina said. "No,you didn't!You do that thing,evil things will attack me and friend."Rukas said. "We'll do any thing for save you!"Vilina said. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-03-26 답변내용 Corrections: "You see?I think Rukas have..have.."Elen mumbled. ✔ "You see? I think Rukas have..have.." Elen mumbled. "Rukas what?I didn't see anything about Rukas."Vilina answered. ✔ "Rukas what? I didn't see anything unsual," Vilina answered. "Maybe you..see the brightest light?"Floa said. ✔ Maybe you saw the light? Floa said. "Yes,I did!You too?I think in old days,she was good and nice elf."Elen said. ✔ "Yes, I did! Did you see it too? I think in old days, she was good and a nice elf," Elen said. "I know,tell the truth,she was very beautyful,kindful and excellent elf.Everyone love her.Her reall name is Kindina B. Excellen.Even queen and king love her."Floa explained. ✔ "I know, to tell you the truth, she was very beautiful, kind and an excellent elf. Everyone loves her. Her real name is Kindina B. Excellent. Even the queen and king love her," Floa explained. "Oh..We are understand,but why she become evilest thing?"Elen and Vilina asked. ✔ "Oh..we understand, but why did she become bad? "Elen and Vilina asked. "Because she caught evil things.That time,we have war with monsters. They make Kindina become evil."Floa said. ✔ "Because she was caught by the evil doers. That time, we have war with the monsters. They made Kindina an evil one," Floa said. "Go!I want meet Ruka..Kindina right now!"shouted Vilina. ✔ "Go! I want to meet Ruka..Kindina right now!" Vilina shouted. "Why?You want covenant to Kindina?!"Elen said. ✔ "Why? Do you want the covenant to Kindina?!" Elen said. "Yes,I am.Than I'll make her return to Kindina."Vilina said. ✔ "Yes,I am. I'll make her become Kindina," Vilina said. "Okey,alright.Go,go right now!"Floa shouted. ✔ "Okey,alright! Go, go right now!" Floa shouted. ==========They met Rukas(Kindina). ✔ They met Rukas (Kindina). "Rukas,I want covenant with you.Okey?"Vilina said. ✔ "Rukas,I want the covenant with you, Okey?" Vilina said. "Okey,you little fairy.What is your covenant?"Rukas asked. ✔ "Okey,you little fairy. What is your covenant?" Rukas asked. "Um..I heared in the old day,you are the elf."Vilina said. ✔ "Um..I heard in old day, you were the elf," Vilina said. "Yeah!Why?I'm so sad about that!"shouted Rukas. ✔ "Yeah! Why? I'm so sad about that!" Rukas shouted. "Why you sad about that?Can I hear about your story?"Vilina said softly. ✔ "Why are you sad about that? Can you tell me your story?" Vilina said softly. "In old days..when I'm the elf,I'm so happy.But one day someone took me the evil way.And I become evil.I..I..want go back in old day when I'm elf..Kindina."Rukas whined. ✔ "In old days, I'm an elf, I was so happy. One day someone took me tho become an evil. I become an evil and I want go back in the old days when I was just a happy elf, Kindina," Rukas whined. "I'll help you with my fairy and elf friends."Vilina said. ✔ "I'll help you together with my fairy and elf friends,"Vilina said. "No,you didn't!You do that thing,evil things will attack me and friend."Rukas said. ✔ "No, you couldn't! You don't know anything. The evil doers will attack me and your friends," Rukas said. "We'll do any thing for save you!"Vilina said. ✔ "We'll do anything to save you!" Vilina said.