1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-04-04 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 I'm Linda's doll. 내 용 In America New York ,live one girl named Jenny Len Caris. People was called her Linda. Lida was 12years old and she have little sister named Jein Len Carus. And people called her Lin. Linda have big doll house. Papa doll is Pista,mama doll is Kely,little sister doll is Dori and sister doll is Amelda. They are alive!Yeah,of course people don't know dolls alive. " Hello!I'm Amelda.I have my own room in doll house."said Amelda. "Amelda,come here and please help the makeing dinner!"Mama said. "All right mom!I'll go right now."shouted Amelda. "Wow,today's dinner is very good!But mom,what about desert?"Dori said. "Today's desert is chocolate pudding and fruit."mama said. "Oh,Linda is coming,hide!"Papa said. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-04-05 답변내용 Corrections: In America New York ,live one girl named Jenny Len Caris. ✔ In New York, America there was a girl named Jenny Len Caris. People was called her Linda. ✔ People called her Linda. Lida was 12years old and she have little sister named Jein Len Carus. ✔ Linda was 12 years old and she has a little sister named Jein Len Carus. And people called her Lin. ✔ People called her Lin. Linda have big doll house. ✔ Linda has a big doll. Papa doll is Pista,mama doll is Kely,little sister doll is Dori and sister doll is Amelda. ✔ The father doll is Pista, the mother doll is Kelly, the little sister doll is Dori and the older sister doll is Amelda. They are alive! = Correct / They're at peace. Yeah,of course people don't know dolls alive. ✔ Yeah, of course people don't know dolls are alive. " Hello!I'm Amelda.I have my own room in doll house."said Amelda. ✔ " Hello!I'm Amelda.I have my own room in the doll house," Amelda said. "Amelda,come here and please help the makeing dinner!"Mama said. ✔ "Amelda, come here and please help to prepare dinner!" the mother said. "All right mom!I'll go right now."shouted Amelda. ✔ "Alright mom! I'll go right now." Amelda shouted. "Wow,today's dinner is very good!But mom,what about desert?"Dori said. ✔ "Wow, today's dinner is very good! Mom, what about hte desert?"Dori said. "Today's desert is chocolate pudding and fruit."mama said. ✔ "Today's desert is chocolate pudding and fruit." the mother said. "Oh,Linda is coming,hide!"Papa said. ✔ "Oh, Linda is coming, hide!" the father said.