1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-04-06 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 No,dolls not eat reall food! 내 용 "My pretty dolls!Look who was visit."Linda said. Linda's friend visited the house. "Hi,princess Amelda.Oh..she was so cute!Please,Linda.I want your sister doll Amelda.She was just look like doll princess."Cindy(Linda's friend)said. "N.o. Spell no!Amelda is favorite doll.You can buy sister doll in the market."Linda said."Okey.But you have any fruits?I want make some snack for dolls."Cindy said. Linda lead the Cindy to kitchen. "Wow,how amazing!Cindy was want make some snack for me!"Amelda wispered. "But how we eat reall food?We are doll."mama doll said. Then Linda and Cindy come in. "Amelda,I make some fruit juice for you.This is avocado. Cindy said.And she dropped some juice on Amelda's mouse. "What are you doing?Dolls can't eat reall food!"Linda shouted. "I know,but you don't allowed I have Amelda.And now,I hate you.Lazy lady Linda!"Cindy said."What?What you saying?Lazy lady Linda?!And you are not clean and claver lady,you dirty girl!"Linda shouted. Linda and Cindy was fighting and Cindy go to her home. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-04-09 답변내용 Corrections: "My pretty dolls!Look who was visit."Linda said. ✔ "My pretty dolls! Look who visited us," Linda said. Linda's friend visited the house. = Correct Sentence "Hi,princess Amelda.Oh..she was so cute!Please,Linda.I want your sister doll Amelda.She was just look like doll princess."Cindy(Linda's friend)said. ✔ "Hi, Princess Amelda! Oh, she was so cute! Please Linda, I want your sister doll Amelda. She just looked like a doll princess," Cindy said (Linda's friend) "N.o. Spell no!Amelda is favorite doll.You can buy sister doll in the market."Linda said. ✔ "No, Spell no! Amelda is my favorite doll. You can buy your sister's a doll in the market," Linda said. "Okey.But you have any fruits?I want make some snack for dolls."Cindy said. ✔ "Okey, but you have any fruits?I want make some snacks for dolls."Cindy said. Linda lead the Cindy to kitchen. ✔ Linda lead Cindy to kitchen. "Wow,how amazing!Cindy was want make some snack for me!"Amelda wispered. ✔ "Wow, how amazing! Cindy wanted to make some snacks for me!" Amelda wispered. "But how we eat reall food?We are doll."mama doll said. ✔ "How are we going to eat the real food? We are dolls." mother doll said. Then Linda and Cindy come in. ✔ Linda and Cindy went inside. "Amelda,I make some fruit juice for you.This is avocado. Cindy said. ✔ "Amelda, I make some fruit juice for you. This is an avocado," Cindy said. And she dropped some juice on Amelda's mouse. ✔ She dropped some juice on Amelda's mouse. "What are you doing?Dolls can't eat reall food!"Linda shouted. ✔ "What are you doing? Dolls can't eat real food!" Linda shouted. "I know,but you don't allowed I have Amelda.And now,I hate you.Lazy lady Linda!"Cindy said. ✔ "I know, but you don't allow it. I have Amelda now. I hate you lazy Linda!" Cindy said. "What?What you saying?Lazy lady Linda?!And you are not clean and claver lady,you dirty girl!"Linda shouted. ✔ "What did you just said to me, lazy Linda? Are you clean enough to say those dirty words?!" Linda shouted. Linda and Cindy was fighting and Cindy go to her home. ✔ Linda and Cindy had a fight and Cindy went home.