1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-04-07 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 I don't want go to Cindy's home 내 용 After 4days,Cindy visit the Linda's house again. "Why you comimg in my house?We're friendship is over!!"Linda shouted."I don't want to meet you,too!I'm just...here!It's your favorite manicure set."Cindy said."It's my favorite!Chocolet color,mint,strawberry,wow it's so good!But why you give me a this manicure set?"Linda said. "I..want change that manicure set and your sister doll Amelda."Cindy said."No.Amelda is my cutie pie.You never bring the Amelda at your home."Linda said."How about this?Manicure set and lemon,coke and blueberry lollipops."Cindy said. "Um...okey.But you can olny lant Amelda.You must bring back Amelda at after two weeks!"Linda said. "Okey,okey.I'll go to my home "Cindy said and handed Amelda in her hand.Cindy come back to her house.And she pick out doll foods in her drawer."Miss.Amelda,you want some lemon tea?"Linda said.And Cindy answered herself and she played her self. Than,her mom called Cindy."Cindy,dinner time!"her mom said. "Okey,mom!"Cindy said.Cindy was out."Whew,eh?Who are you?!"Amelda said."I'm the Barbie.And you?" Barbie said. "Hello,Barbie.I'm Amelda.Nice to meet you.."Amelda said. "Amelda?Nice to meet you too.Oh,and don't called me Barbie.My reall name is Bibienne.You want visit my dream house tomorrow?"Bibienne said."Oh,yeah.I love it.But Cindy look at me.How we move?"Amelda said."Tomorrow is vacation and Cindy go to travle with her family.We are free!"Bibienne said. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-04-09 답변내용 Corrections: After 4days,Cindy visit the Linda's house again. ✔ After 4 days, Cindy visited Linda's house again. "Why you comimg in my house?We're friendship is over!!"Linda shouted. ✔ "Why did you come to my house? We're not friends anymore!" Linda shouted. "I don't want to meet you,too!I'm just...here!It's your favorite manicure set."Cindy said. ✔ "I don't want to meet you, too! I'm just here! It's your favorite manicure set," Cindy said. "It's my favorite!Chocolet color,mint,strawberry,wow it's so good!But why you give me a this manicure set?"Linda said. ✔ "It's my favorite chocolate color, mint, strawberry, wow it's so good! Why are you giving me this manicure set?" Linda said. "I..want change that manicure set and your sister doll Amelda."Cindy said. ✔ "I want to change that manicure set with your sister's doll Amelda," Cindy said. "No.Amelda is my cutie pie.You never bring the Amelda at your home."Linda said. ✔ "No, Amelda is my cutie pie. You should never bring Amelda into your home," Linda said. "How about this?Manicure set and lemon,coke and blueberry lollipops."Cindy said. ✔ "How about these? I'll give you the manicure set, lemon, coke and blueberry lollipops, "Cindy said. "Um...okey.But you can olny lant Amelda.You must bring back Amelda at after two weeks!"Linda said. ✔ "Um...okey. You can only borrow Amelda. You must bring her back after two weeks!" Linda said. "Okey,okey.I'll go to my home "Cindy said ✔ "Okey, okey. I'll go to my home" Cindy said and handed Amelda in her hand.Cindy come back to her house.And she pick out doll foods in her drawer. ✔ Linda handed over Amelda to Cinday. ✔ Cindy came back to her house and she pick up the doll's food in her drawer. "Miss.Amelda,you want some lemon tea?"Linda said. ✔ "Miss Amelda, do you want some lemon tea?"Linda said. And Cindy answered herself and she played her self. ✔ Cindy played with Amelda. Than,her mom called Cindy."Cindy,dinner time!"her mom said. ✔ "Cindy, dinner time!" Cindy's mom said. "Okey, mom!"Cindy said. = Correct Cindy was out. ✔ Cindy went to the dinning room. "Whew,eh?Who are you?!"Amelda said."I'm the Barbie.And you?" Barbie said. ✔ "Phew! Who are you?!" Amelda said. ✔ "I'm Barbie, and you?" Barbie said. "Hello,Barbie.I'm Amelda.Nice to meet you.."Amelda said. ✔ "Hello, Barbie! I'm Amelda. It's nice to meet you," Amelda said. "Amelda?Nice to meet you too.Oh,and don't called me Barbie.My reall name is Bibienne.You want visit my dream house tomorrow?"Bibienne said. ✔ "Amelda! Nice to meet you too. Oh, you should not call me Barbie. My real name is Bibienne. Do you want to visit my dream house tomorrow?" Bibienne said. "Oh,yeah.I love it.But Cindy look at me.How we move?"Amelda said. ✔ "Oh, yeah! I love it. Cindy look at me. Are we going to move?" Amelda said. "Tomorrow is vacation and Cindy go to travle with her family.We are free!"Bibienne said. ✔ "Tomorrow is vacation and Cindy will travel with her family. We are free!" Bibienne said.