1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-04-08 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Bi's dream house. 내 용 On vacation day,Cindy go to the travel with her family. "Bibienne!Where are you?Today we promise I go to your dream house!"Amelda said."I'm here in dream house!I'll go to your box house,now."Bibienne said.Bibienne and Amelda was meet in Amelda's box house."Amelda,I'll call you Mel.And you'll call me Bi."Bi said."Great idea.We're name is long and we hard to call each other's name.But Mel and Bi is really short and easy nickname."Mel said."Follow me,Mel.We are go to the my dream house!"Bi said."Wow,you have sofa,TV,reall books,lots of rooms,many cosmetics and even elevator!Hey,Bi.I want do soap shower."Mel said."Okey,we'll have soap shower and then,we go to my dressing room!Let see..you have perfect body like Barbie,like me."Bi said."Your shompoo is really good.My hairs are smooth!And..where is dressing room?Let's go to the dressing room."Mel said."Here!Wearing any clothes you want and accessorys too!"Bi said.Mel weared pink silk dress and wered black pearl headband,earing,ring and necklace.Bi weared black rose on yellow dress,ruby ring,necklace and black pearl earing. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-04-09 답변내용 Corrections: On vacation day,Cindy go to the travel with her family. ✔ On vacation day, Cindy will travel with her family. "Bibienne!Where are you?Today we promise I go to your dream house!"Amelda said. ✔ "Bibienne! Where are you? Today, we promise to go to your dream house!" Amelda said. "I'm here in dream house!I'll go to your box house,now."Bibienne said. ✔ "I'm here in my dream house! I'll go to your house now," Bibienne said. Bibienne and Amelda was meet in Amelda's box house. ✔ Bibienne and Amelda meet in Amelda's box house. "Amelda,I'll call you Mel.And you'll call me Bi."Bi said. ✔ "Amelda, I'll call you Mel and you'll call me Bi," Bi said. "Great idea.We're name is long and we hard to call each other's name.But Mel and Bi is really short and easy nickname."Mel said. ✔ "Great idea! Our name is long and it's hard to call each other's name. Mel and Bi are really short and easy nicknames,"Mel said. "Follow me,Mel.We are go to the my dream house!"Bi said. ✔ "Follow me, Mel. We will go to my dream house!" Bi said. "Wow,you have sofa,TV,reall books,lots of rooms,many cosmetics and even elevator!Hey,Bi.I want do soap shower."Mel said. ✔ "Wow, you have the sofa, TV, real books, lots of rooms, many cosmetics and even elevator! Hey,Bi. I want to do soap shower,"Mel said. "Okey,we'll have soap shower and then,we go to my dressing room!Let see..you have perfect body like Barbie,like me."Bi said. ✔"Okey, we'll have soap shower and then, we could go to my dressing room! Let see, if you have the perfect body just like Barbie and I."Bi said. "Your shompoo is really good.My hairs are smooth!And..where is dressing room?Let's go to the dressing room."Mel said. ✔ "Your shompoo is really good. My hair looked smooth! Where is the dressing room? Let's go to the dressing room," Mel said. "Here!Wearing any clothes you want and accessorys too!"Bi said. ✔ "Here! Wearing any clothes you want and accessories too!" Bi said. Mel weared pink silk dress and wered black pearl headband,earing,ring and necklace. ✔ Mel wore pink silk dress, wore black pearl headband, earrings, ring and necklace. Bi weared black rose on yellow dress,ruby ring,necklace and black pearl earing. ✔ Bi wore yellow dress with the black rose on it, ruby ring, necklace and black pearl earing.