1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-04-09 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Ven and Plo 내 용 "Bi,why we weared this gorgious and expensive dress and accessorys?"Mel asked."Because today is toy's party!"Bi answered. "Wow!In Linda's house's toys are noble.I don't like noble,I like fun and happy."Mel said."Mel,you want help and prepare party food.Maybe some dolls will visit my home."Bi said."Okey,I'll help you for party and party food."Mel said. They prepared chocolet,pistachio and strawberry ice cream,apple candy,donuts,chocolet mousse cake,lemonade and milkshake. At 5o'clock,doll's party is start. Mel and Bi saw new man doll."Mel,they visit Cindy's house with you at your house?"Bi said."No,I don't know.They walked up to I and you."Mel answered."Um..hello?I'm Ven,and this is Plo.And.."Ven said."I'm Bibienne and this is Amelda.We're nickname is Bi and Mel."Bi said."Oh,hi Bi and Mel.Next time is dance time.You have dance partner..?"Plo asked."Yeah,oh,I..I mean no."Mel said."How about we?Oh,can we dance with you beautiful ladys?"asked Ven."Okey..."said Bi and Mel seemed shy. Ven and Mel,Plo and Bi danced and visited Bi's dream house. And they eat party foods."You want visit our house?Our house is fine."Ven said.Bi and Mel visit Ven and Plo's house. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-04-10 답변내용 Corrections: "Bi,why we weared this gorgious and expensive dress and accessorys?"Mel asked. ✔ "Bi, why do we wear this gorgeous and expensive dresses and accessories?" Mel asked. "Because today is toy's party!"Bi answered. ✔"Today is the toy's party!" Bi answered. "Wow!In Linda's house's toys are noble.I don't like noble,I like fun and happy."Mel said. ✔ "Wow! In Linda's house's the toys are noble. I don't like to be noble, I like to be fun and happy."Mel said. "Mel,you want help and prepare party food.Maybe some dolls will visit my home."Bi said. ✔ "Mel, do you want to help in preparing for the party food? Maybe, some dolls will visit my home," Bi said. "Okey,I'll help you for party and party food."Mel said. ✔ "Okey, I'll help you for party and the food," Mel said. They prepared chocolet,pistachio and strawberry ice cream,apple candy,donuts,chocolet mousse cake,lemonade and milkshake. ✔ They prepared chocolate, pistachio and strawberry icecream, apple candy, donuts, chocolate mousse cake,lemonade and milkshake. At 5o'clock,doll's party is start. ✔ The doll party will start at 5 o'clock. Mel and Bi saw new man doll. ✔ Mel and Bi saw the new doll. "Mel,they visit Cindy's house with you at your house?"Bi said. ✔ "Mel, they visited Cindy's house together with you?"Bi said. "No,I don't know.They walked up to I and you."Mel answered. ✔ "No, I don't know. They walked together with us." Mel answered. "Um..hello?I'm Ven,and this is Plo.And.."Ven said. ✔ "Ummm, hello? I'm Ven and this is Plo," Ven said. "I'm Bibienne and this is Amelda.We're nickname is Bi and Mel."Bi said. ✔ "I'm Bibienne and this is Amelda. Our nicknames are Bi and Mel." Bi said. "Oh,hi Bi and Mel.Next time is dance time.You have dance partner..?"Plo asked. ✔ "Oh, hi Bi and Mel, dance time next. Do you have a dance partner?" Plo asked. "Yeah,oh,I..I mean no."Mel said. ✔ "Yeah, oh,I mean no," Mel said. "How about we?Oh,can we dance with you beautiful ladys?"asked Ven. ✔ "How about us? Oh, can we dance with you beautiful ladys?" Ven asked. "Okey..."said Bi and Mel seemed shy. ✔ "Okey" Bi and Mel said. ✔ They seemed so shy. Ven and Mel,Plo and Bi danced and visited Bi's dream house. ✔ Ven, Mel, Plo and Bi danced and visited Bi's dream house. And they eat party foods. ✔ After they eat the party foods. "You want visit our house?Our house is fine."Ven said.Bi and Mel visit Ven and Plo's house. ✔ "Do you want to visit our house? Our house is fine." Ven said. ✔ Bi and Mel visited Ven and Plo's house.