1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-04-11 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Goldie and Slivie 2 내 용 It was Mel's phone."Hello.Yes,I'm Amelda and who are you?Rite,Why you call to me?Ah...okey."Mel said."Ven,you have horses?"Mel asked to Ven."Yes,I have one horse.Her name is Goldie and Plo have a one horse too!"Ven answered. "Yeah,I have a horse.Her name is Silvie."Plo said."But why you ask it?And who was call to you?"Bi asked."It was Rite,and he said "Maybe you have horses bring them to tomorrow's picnic."Mel answered."Oh,I'm tired.Ven and Plo,now time to go your home.Good night and goodbye."Bi said.Plo,Ven,Bi and Mel was sleep.The morning was coming.It was picnic day. "Mel,mel wake up!Ken and Rite will come to our house!"Bi shouted."Okey,okey."Mel said.Bi wearing white T-shirt,blue jean and Mel wearing long pink shirt and blue jean. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-04-15 답변내용 Corrections: It was Mel's phone. = Correct Sentence "Hello.Yes,I'm Amelda and who are you?Rite,Why you call to me?Ah...okey."Mel said. ✔ "Hello! Yes,I'm Amelda and who are you? Rite, Why are you calling me? Ah! okey," Mel said. "Ven,you have horses?"Mel asked to Ven. ✔ "Ven, do you have horses?" Mel asked to Ven. "Yes,I have one horse.Her name is Goldie and Plo have a one horse too!"Ven answered. ✔ "Yes, I have a horse. Her name is Goldie and Plo have a horse too!" Ven answered. "Yeah,I have a horse.Her name is Silvie."Plo said. ✔ "Yeah,I have a horse, her name is Silvie," Plo said. "But why you ask it?And who was call to you?"Bi asked. ✔ "Why did you ask? Who called you?" Bi asked. "It was Rite,and he said ✔ "It was Rite," Plo said. "Maybe you have horses bring them to tomorrow's picnic."Mel answered. ✔ "Maybe you have horses, bring them on tomorrow's picnic," Mel answered. "Oh,I'm tired.Ven and Plo,now time to go your home.Good night and goodbye."Bi said. ✔ "Oh, I'm tired. Ven and Plo, now is the time to go to your home. Goodnight and goodbye," Bi said. Plo,Ven,Bi and Mel was sleep. ✔ Plo, Ven, Bi and Mel were asleep. The morning was coming. = Correct Sentence It was picnic day. = Correct Sentence "Mel,mel wake up!Ken and Rite will come to our house!"Bi shouted. = Correct "Okey,okey."Mel said. = Correct Bi wearing white T-shirt,blue jean and Mel wearing long pink shirt and blue jean. ✔ Bi is wearing white T-shirt, blue jeans and Mel is wearing the long pink shirt and blue jeans.