1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-04-13 Weather    Feeling  Happy 제 목 Hello,Goldie and Slivie! 내 용 Rite and Ken visited Bi's house. Ding-dong!Door bell is ringing,Bi run to front door.Visiters are Rite and Ken. "Hi,Ken!Where is Rite?"Bi said."He bought the our horses.And where's your horses?"Ken said."Ven and Plo will come to the our home.We lented our friend's horses.Amelda!Ken and Rite is already come!"Bi said.Mel came down to the living room."Hi,Ken and Rite!You guys are already bought your horses!"Mel said."Mel and Bi!We bought Goldie and Slivie!"Ven and Plo shouted. "Huh?Who are you?"Rite said."We are Ven and Plo.And who,are you?!"Ven and Plo said. "Hello,Goldie and Slivie!I'm Amelda and this Bibienne."Mel said to Goldie and Slivie.Goldie and Slivie look like glad to meet Bi and Mel. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-04-15 답변내용 Corrections: Rite and Ken visited Bi's house. = Correct Sentence Ding-dong!Door bell is ringing,Bi run to front door.Visiters are Rite and Ken. ✔ Ding-dong! The door bell rang. Bi ran to the door and saw Rite and Ken. "Hi,Ken!Where is Rite?"Bi said. ✔"Hi,Ken you were with Rite?" Bi asked. "He bought the our horses.And where's your horses?"Ken said. ✔ "He bought the our horses and where's your horses?" Ken said. "Ven and Plo will come to the our home.We lented our friend's horses.Amelda!Ken and Rite is already come!"Bi said. ✔ "Ven and Plo came to the our home. We lent our friend's horses. Amelda! Ken and Rite are here!" Bi said. Mel came down to the living room. = Correct Sentence "Hi,Ken and Rite!You guys are already bought your horses!"Mel said. ✔ "Hi Ken and Rite!, Did you bring the horses?" Mel said. "Mel and Bi!We bought Goldie and Slivie!"Ven and Plo shouted. ✔ "Mel and Bi! We brought Goldie and Slivie!" Ven and Plo shouted. "Huh?Who are you?"Rite said. = Correct "We are Ven and Plo.And who,are you?!"Ven and Plo said. ✔ "We are Ven and Plo. Who are you?!" Ven and Plo said. "Hello,Goldie and Slivie!I'm Amelda and this Bibienne."Mel said to Goldie and Slivie. ✔ "Hello Goldie and Slivie! I'm Amelda and this is Bibienne," Mel said to Goldie and Silvie. Goldie and Slivie look like glad to meet Bi and Mel. ✔ Goldie and Silvie look glad to meet Bi and Mel.