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Debate competition
2019-04-12
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start of the week
2019-04-08
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cold and caugh
2019-04-05
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planning to make a new club
2019-03-25
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concerning
2019-03-14
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I want more time
2019-03-08
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Be thankful for all i've got now
2018-08-03
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my own credit card
2018-07-31
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After the field trip
2017-05-17
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Field trip
2017-05-16
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Hi,Rite!Ooh,who are they?"someone said."Hm,I'm Rikel.Barbie's enemy.And I'm Rite's cousin."Rikel said."Hey,Rikel.You want ride horses?Ah,I'm Amelda,this is Bibienne,Ven,Plo,Ken,Emma and Juliana."Mel said."Hi.I'm so good at horse riding.And I bought my horse,Rikelia!"Rikel said."Hm..one,two,three..five people have horse.Wait a minit,please."Mel said. "Here,horses.This is Mena,Milky,Marin and Minty.Emma,Juliana,Bi and I'll ride this horses."Mel said. "Let's go!Watch out,ladys.Maybe you fell to the earth,you'll have pain."Rite said."Hmmm.Horse riding is easy.Isn't it guys?"Mel said."Yeah,I love it!Horse riding is so exciting!I'm feeling cool!"girls answered."Do...don't be..a s..stupid!I..I'm alre...already..know..hor..horse riding's fu..fun!"Rikel said."Hahaha,Rikel,your face is look so funny.You hard to ride horse?Hahahaha!"Bi laughed."Bof!I..I did..didn't!"Rikel shouted. Ven and Plo wispered."I don't want like that vanity girl.I like Bi or Mel's style."Ven said."Me too!"Plo said. Rikel's face glowing with red.Rite and Ken was smiled.
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Corrections: Hi,Rite!Ooh,who are they?"someone said. ✔ "Hi Rite! Ooh,who are they?" Someone said. "Hm,I'm Rikel.Barbie's enemy.And I'm Rite's cousin."Rikel said. ✔ "Hmmm, I'm Rikel, Barbie's enemy. I'm Rite's cousin." Rikel said. "Hey,Rikel.You want ride horses?Ah,I'm Amelda,this is Bibienne,Ven,Plo,Ken,Emma and Juliana."Mel said. ✔ "Hey, Rikel. Do you want ride horses? Ah, I'm Amelda, this is Bibienne, Ven, Plo, Ken, Emma and Juliana."Mel said. "Hi.I'm so good at horse riding.And I bought my horse,Rikelia!"Rikel said. ✔ "Hi, I'm so good at horseback riding. I brought my horse, Rikelia!" Rikel said. "Hm..one,two,three..five people have horse.Wait a minit,please."Mel said. ✔ "Hmmm..one, two, three... five people have horses. Wait a minute, please," Mel said. "Here,horses.This is Mena,Milky,Marin and Minty.Emma,Juliana,Bi and I'll ride this horses."Mel said. ✔ "Here are the horses. This is Mena, Milky, Marin and Minty. Emma, Juliana, Bi and I will ride this horses."Mel said. "Let's go!Watch out,ladys.Maybe you fell to the earth,you'll have pain."Rite said. ✔ "Let's go! Watch out,ladies. Maybe, you'll fell on the ground," Rite said. "Hmmm.Horse riding is easy.Isn't it guys?"Mel said. ✔ "Hmmm, horseback riding is easy. Isn't it guys?" Mel said. "Yeah,I love it!Horse riding is so exciting!I'm feeling cool!"girls answered. ✔ "Yeah, we love it! Horseback riding is so exciting! We felt cool!" girls answered. "Do...don't be..a s..stupid!I..I'm alre...already..know..hor..horse riding's fu..fun!"Rikel said. ✔ "Don't be stupid! I already know that horseback riding is fun!" Rikel said. "Hahaha,Rikel,your face is look so funny.You hard to ride horse?Hahahaha!"Bi laughed. ✔ "Hahaha, Rikel your face looks so funny.Are you having a hard time riding a horse? Hahaha!" Bi laughed. "Bof!I..I did..didn't!"Rikel shouted. = Correct Ven and Plo wispered."I don't want like that vanity girl.I like Bi or Mel's style."Ven said."Me too!"Plo said. ✔ "I don't want that vanity girl. I like Bi or Mel's style. "Ven whispered. "Me too!" Plo whispered. Rikel's face glowing with red.Rite and Ken was smiled. ✔ Rikel's face was red. Rite and Ken smiled.