1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-04-16 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 I want be popstar like Bibienne and Amelda! 내 용 Mel and her friends get some rest in forest.Rikel take out little wallet.It was Rikel's make up kits.And she started to make up."Eeeek!Rikel,what are you doing to your face?You look like clowns!"Mel said."Your make up is so dark.Mel and I have make up kits too!Just like..you!These days,girls aways bring the make up kits everywhere!"Bi said.Mel and Bi started make up too. Rite,Ken,Ven and Plo saw Bi,Mel and Rikel,they said... "Wow,Bi and mel!Your make up is perfect!You girls look like goodness.And Rikel..!"Ken and Rite said."Hey,ugly Rikel.What happen to your face?You transformed stupid clown?Hahaha!!"Ven and Plo said. "What!My make up is perfect!Oh,look at that.He was magazine photographer.Hey,come on and take my picture."Rikel said. Then photographer was coming to doll friends. "Hello.I'm Joshu Mcbrown.The 'Best beauty doll'magazine photographer.Excuse me,can I know your name beauty ladys?"Joshu said."I'm Amelda and this is Bibienne.Nice to meet you,Joshu."Mel said.Mel and Bi pose like cute cat. Then after 3days,Bi and Mel's picture is famouse for magazine and newspaper.And someone is visit Mel and Bi's home. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-04-17 답변내용 Corrections: Mel and her friends get some rest in forest. ✔ Mel and her friends got some rest in forest. Rikel take out little wallet. ✔ Rikel took out her little wallet. It was Rikel's make up kits.And she started to make up. ✔ It was Rikel's make up kit and she started to put make-up. "Eeeek!Rikel,what are you doing to your face?You look like clowns!"Mel said. ✔ "Eeeek! Rikel, what are you doing on your face? You look like a clown!" Mel said. "Your make up is so dark.Mel and I have make up kits too!Just like..you!These days,girls aways bring the make up kits everywhere!"Bi said. ✔ "Your make up is so thick. Mel and I have make up kits too just like yours! These days, girls always bring their make up kits everywhere!" Bi said. Mel and Bi started make up too. ✔ Mel and Bi started to put make up. Rite,Ken,Ven and Plo saw Bi,Mel and Rikel,they said... ✔ Rite, Ken, Ven and Plo saw Bi, Mel and Rikel. "Wow,Bi and mel!Your make up is perfect!You girls look like goodness.And Rikel..!"Ken and Rite said. ✔ "Wow, Bi and Mel! Your make up is perfect! You girls look like Goddesses." Ken and Rite said. "Hey,ugly Rikel.What happen to your face?You transformed stupid clown?Hahaha!!"Ven and Plo said. ✔ "Hey ugly Rikel, What happen to your face? You transformed into a stupid clown, Hahaha!" Ven and Plo said. "What!My make up is perfect!Oh,look at that.He was magazine photographer.Hey,come on and take my picture."Rikel said. ✔ "What! My make up is perfect! Oh,look at that, he was the magazine photographer. Hey, come on and take my picture," Rikel said. Then photographer was coming to doll friends. ✔ The photographer went to them. "Hello.I'm Joshu Mcbrown.The 'Best beauty doll'magazine photographer.Excuse me,can I know your name beauty ladys?"Joshu said. ✔ "Hello, I'm Joshu Mcbrown. The 'Best beauty doll'magazine photographer'. Excuse me, can I know your name beautiful ladies?" Joshu said. "I'm Amelda and this is Bibienne.Nice to meet you,Joshu."Mel said. ✔ "I'm Amelda and this is Bibienne. It's nice to meet you, Joshu." Mel said. Mel and Bi pose like cute cat. ✔ Mel and Bi pose like a cute cat. Then after 3days,Bi and Mel's picture is famouse for magazine and newspaper. ✔ Then after 3 days, Bi and Mel's pictures are famous to the magazine and newspaper. And someone is visit Mel and Bi's home. ✔ Someone visited Mel and Bi's home.