1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-04-19 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Hello,Amelda and Bibienne! 내 용 Visiter is fashionista Jina Cocolin.Bi and Mel was so surprised. "Fashionista Jina Cocolin!Hello,how you visit we?"said Mel. "Hello.You know name!Yeah,my name is Jina Cocolin.You are Amelda and Bibienne.I want you girls help to take a photo for magazine model project."Jina said.That time,Rikel was visit Bi's house."Bi,Mel!I bought your favorite cookies!Chocolet cherry!Huh?Who are this girl?"Rikel said. "Rikel!How you don't know Jina Cocolin?This is fashionista Jina!"Mel said. "This is Jina?Hahaha,very funny!How Jini visit you?Oh,this is my favorite magazine!Eeeek!Why your pictures in magazine?"Rikel said. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-04-19 답변내용 Corrections: Visiter is fashionista Jina Cocolin. ✔ The visitor is the fashionista, Jina Cocolin. Bi and Mel was so surprised. ✔ Bi and Mel were so surprised. "Fashionista Jina Cocolin!Hello,how you visit we?"said Mel. ✔ "Fashionista Jina Cocolin! Hello, why did you visit us?"said Mel. "Hello.You know name!Yeah,my name is Jina Cocolin.You are Amelda and Bibienne.I want you girls help to take a photo for magazine model project."Jina said. ✔ "Hello, yo know me! Yeah, my name is Jina Cocolin. You are Amelda and Bibienne. I want you girls to help me take a photo for magazine model project," Jina said. That time,Rikel was visit Bi's house. ✔ Rikel visited Bi's house too. "Bi,Mel!I bought your favorite cookies!Chocolet cherry!Huh?Who are this girl?"Rikel said. ✔ "Bi and Mel! I bought your favorite cookies! Chocolate cherry! Huh? Who is this girl?" Rikel said. "Rikel!How you don't know Jina Cocolin?This is fashionista Jina!"Mel said. ✔ "Rikel! You don't know Jina Cocolin? She is fashionista Jina!" Mel said. "This is Jina?Hahaha,very funny!How Jini visit you?Oh,this is my favorite magazine!Eeeek!Why your pictures in magazine?"Rikel said. ✔ "This is Jina ?Hahaha, it's very funny! How come she visited you? Oh, this is my favorite magazine! Eeeek! Why are your pictures in this magazine?" Rikel said.