1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-04-20 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 Hi,Yohane..:) 내 용 "You guys are become a reall pop star!"Rikel said. "Oh,not an pop star,Rikel.We just allowed to take our picture.Jina was saw our picture in magazine,and she visit Bibienne and I."mel said."Yes,Amemlda was right.I saw Bibienne and Amelda's picture in magazine and I visit Bibienne and Amelda.Ah!I want you girls changed your names.Bibienne is..Bibienne Mckania and Amelda is mmm..Amelia Ritesn Bloomer.That's fine names,huh?"Jina said."Amelia Ritesn Bloomer.."Amelia said."We love this names.Thank you Jina."Bibienne said.After 3 weeks,Bibienne and Amelia go to the photo studio for magazine model picture."Hello,Amelia and Bibienne.I'm Yohane.Your manager and you'll doing singer and model.We are in other place to Cindy don't know."Yohane said. Bibienne and Amelia take a picture for magazine.Than,Ken and Rite visit."Hi,Amelia and Bibienne.We heared your name is changed.I'm so proud of you,Amelia.Your enogh to my girl friend."Rite said."Thank you,Rite.How about see our night party dress?We are go to the party from Rukes.Lin(her desiner)!Please bring the our night dress."Amelia said.Amelia's dress was so pretty.Bibienne's dress is cute.That same time,Rukes was coming to Amelia and Bibienne."Amelia and Bibienne.Do you want some flower teas?"Rukes asked.RIte and Ken icy cold stare to Rukes. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-04-22 답변내용 Corrections: "You guys are become a reall pop star!"Rikel said. ✔ "You guys become a real pop star!" Rikel said. "Oh,not an pop star,Rikel.We just allowed to take our picture.Jina was saw our picture in magazine,and she visit Bibienne and I."mel said. ✔ "Oh, not a pop star, Rikel. We just allowed to take our picture. Jina saw our picture in the magazine, and she visited Bibienne and I," Mel said. "Yes,Amemlda was right.I saw Bibienne and Amelda's picture in magazine and I visit Bibienne and Amelda.Ah!I want you girls changed your names.Bibienne is..Bibienne Mckania and Amelda is mmm..Amelia Ritesn Bloomer.That's fine names,huh?"Jina said. ✔ "Yes, Amelda was right. I saw Bibienne and Amelda's picture in the magazine and I visited them. Ah! I want yo, girls to change your names. Bibienne should be Bibienne Mckania and Amelda should be Amelia Ritesn Bloomer. Those are fine names, huh?" Jina said. "Amelia Ritesn Bloomer.."Amelia said. ✔ "Amelia Ritesn Bloomer?" Amelia said. "We love this names.Thank you Jina."Bibienne said. ✔ "We love those names. Thank you Jina."Bibienne said. After 3 weeks,Bibienne and Amelia go to the photo studio for magazine model picture. ✔ After 3 weeks, Bibienne and Amelia went to the studio for the magazine picture model. "Hello,Amelia and Bibienne.I'm Yohane.Your manager and you'll doing singer and model.We are in other place to Cindy don't know."Yohane said. ✔ "Hello, Amelia and Bibienne. I'm Yohane, your manager. You'll do singing and modeling,"Yohane said. Bibienne and Amelia take a picture for magazine.Than,Ken and Rite visit. ✔ Bibienne and Amelia took pictures for the magazine cover. ✔ Ken and Rite visited their place. . "Hi,Amelia and Bibienne.We heared your name is changed.I'm so proud of you,Amelia.Your enogh to my girl friend."Rite said. ✔ "Hi Amelia and Bibienne, we heard your names changed. I'm so proud of you, Amelia. You're enough to be my girlfriend," Rite said. "Thank you,Rite.How about see our night party dress?We are go to the party from Rukes.Lin(her desiner)!Please bring the our night dress."Amelia said. ✔ "Thank you, Rite. Do you want to see the night gown? We could go to the party. Lin is my designer. Please bring the night gown," Amelia said. Amelia's dress was so pretty. = Correct Sentence Bibienne's dress is cute. ✔ Bibienne's dress was cute. That same time,Rukes was coming to Amelia and Bibienne. ✔ At that time, Rukes went to Amelia and Bibienne. "Amelia and Bibienne.Do you want some flower teas?"Rukes asked.RIte and Ken icy cold stare to Rukes. ✔ "Amelia and Bibienne, do you want some flower teas?" Rukes asked. ✔ Rite and Ken had an icy cold stare to Rukes.