1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2013-04-22 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Soccer in school 내 용 In Sunday, I got soccer. I was the GK in my team. In one grader, I was right wing. But the old two GK is leave, I was the GK. In one grader, we had a real game. But it was 5th. And in the second, in primary macth we got lose. Old GK Jung Hyun-yoo, got goal. Now to the Sunday soccer. The team is me, Hyun-yoo, Jun-hyung, Sung-hoon, Ha-young, lastly, Sang-he. Game had started. First, I was GK. But in few minutes later, I change the GK with Hyun-yoo. First, Our team Sung-hoon. I got the boal. Then, other GK had run to me. Then I got pass. To Sung-hoon. And Sung-hoon shoot. It is goal. But in few minutes later, Hyun-yoo got miss. So, Other team got shoot. It is not goal! So, the game had end. We won! It was happy. 답변자 tc0092 답변일 2013-04-23 답변내용 In Sunday, I got soccer. >> Last Sunday, I played soccer. I was the GK in my team. >> no correction ^^ In one grader, I was right wing. >> When I was a first grader, I took the right wing. But the old two GK is leave, I was the GK. >> However, two of our senior GKs left. Thus, I became the new GK. In one grader, we had a real game. >> When I was in first grade, we had a real game. But it was 5th. >> However, we ranked 5th. And in the second, in primary macth we got lose. >> When I was a second grader, we lost in the primary match. Old GK Jung Hyun-yoo, got goal. >> One of our senior GKs, Jung Hyun-yoo, got a goal. Now to the Sunday soccer. >> Now, there was the soccer game last Sunday. The team is me, Hyun-yoo, Jun-hyung, Sung-hoon, Ha-young, lastly, Sang-he. >> The members of my team are: Hyun-yoo, Jun-hyung, Sung-hoon, Ha-young, Sang-he, and of course, me. Game had started. >> The game had started. First, I was GK. >> At first, I was the GK. But in few minutes later, I change the GK with Hyun-yoo. >> However, a few minutes later, Hyun-yoo replaced me. First, Our team Sung-hoon. >> First, our team member, Sung-hoon, got the ball. I got the boal. >> Then, I got the ball. Then, other GK had run to me. >> Then, another GK ran after me. Then I got pass. To Sung-hoon. >> I passed the ball to Sung-hoon. And Sung-hoon shoot. >> Sung-hoot took a shot. It is goal. >> It was a goal. But in few minutes later, Hyun-yoo got miss. >> A few minutes later, Hyun-yoo had missed. So, Other team got shoot. >> Thus, the other team got to shoot. It is not goal! >> They didn't have a goal! So, the game had end. >> Thus, the game ended. We won! >> no correction ^^ It was happy. >> It was a happy victory. Dear Koma, Wow! Congratulations to your team! I think your team work was the key to your success. ^^ Teacher Ann ✿◠‿◠✿