1
Debate competition
2019-04-12
2
start of the week
2019-04-08
3
cold and caugh
2019-04-05
4
planning to make a new club
2019-03-25
5
concerning
2019-03-14
6
I want more time
2019-03-08
7
Be thankful for all i've got now
2018-08-03
8
my own credit card
2018-07-31
9
After the field trip
2017-05-17
10
Field trip
2017-05-16
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
[´ÙÀ½10°³]
ȸ ¿ø
ÀÓ¼¼ºó
ÀÛ¼ºÀÏ
2013-04-29
Weather
Feeling
Satisfaction
Á¦ ¸ñ
Now,everyone have partner!
³» ¿ë
"Applina,I like milkshake and berry roll cake."Panoa said."What are you want,Lin?"Panoa askd to Lin."I like lemonade and blueberry yogurt."Lin said. Lin and Panoa finished the eat,and after a few days,they be a couple. Doll friends are have a picnic together. "Now,all doll friend have a partner."Bibienne said. "But how about Rikel?She didn't have a boyfriend."Amelia said. Then,Rikel appeared with tall man."Hey,now I have boyfriend too!This is Rallp."Rikel said. "Hello,Rallp.Rikel,long time no see!Oh,we are so glad to meet you again!"Amelia said.
´äº¯ÀÚ
tc0010
´äº¯ÀÏ
2013-04-30
´äº¯³»¿ë
Corrections: "Applina,I like milkshake and berry roll cake."Panoa said. = Correct "What are you want,Lin?"Panoa askd to Lin. ✔ "What about you, Lin?" Panoa asked. "I like lemonade and blueberry yogurt."Lin said. = Correct Lin and Panoa finished the eat,and after a few days,they be a couple. ✔ Lin and Panoa finished eating and few days later they became a couple. Doll friends are have a picnic together. ✔ The doll friends had a picnic together. "Now,all doll friend have a partner."Bibienne said. ✔ "Now, all of us have partners," Bibienne said. "But how about Rikel?She didn't have a boyfriend."Amelia said. ✔ "How about Rikel? She didn't have a boyfriend," Amelia said. Then,Rikel appeared with tall man."Hey,now I have boyfriend too!This is Rallp."Rikel said. ✔ Then, Rikel appeared with a tall man. "Hey, I have boyfriend too! This is Ralph." Rikel said. "Hello,Rallp.Rikel,long time no see!Oh,we are so glad to meet you again!"Amelia said. ✔ "Hello, Ralph. Rikel, long time no see! Oh, we're so glad to meet you again!" Amelia said.
