1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-05-09 Weather    Feeling  Happy 제 목 I'm the witch named Serena Kura. 내 용 Hello!My name is Serena Cura.I'm 12 years old and I'm best student in my school,Avenaklin witch school. My friends are Sophia Kalen. She was doing like princess.Another friend,Bicoline Ginasu.I think I can't say all my friends's name. Anyway,I have a lot of friend.Sometime book's princesses are visiting me. I usually pack my lunch noodle,peach,jellys and lemonade or milk shake. I'll go to witch's broomstick racing. I pretce broomstick race every day. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-05-09 답변내용 Corrections: Hello!My name is Serena Cura. ✔ Hello! My name is Serena Kura. I'm 12 years old and I'm best student in my school,Avenaklin witch school. ✔ I'm 12 years old and I'm the best student in my school, Avenaklin Witch School. My friends are Sophia Kalen. ✔ My friends are Sophia and Kalen. She was doing like princess. ✔ She acted like princess. Another friend,Bicoline Ginasu.I think ✔ My another friend os Bicoline Ginasu. I can't say all my friends's name. = Correct Sentence Anyway,I have a lot of friend. = Correct / Anyway,I have lots of friends. Sometime book's princesses are visiting me. ✔ Sometimes, I thought about the book about princesses. I usually pack my lunch noodle,peach,jellys and lemonade or milk shake. ✔ I usually pack my lunch with noodles, peach, jellies and lemonade or milk shake. I'll go to witch's broomstick racing. = Correct Sentence I pretce broomstick race every day. ✔ I practice the broomstick race every day.