1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-05-15 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 You are not my rival,Kalen. 내 용 My friend,Sophia Kalen was go to broomstick racing,too!Sophia and I was very famouse witch in broomstick world.Today is racing day.My mom will pack my favorite snacks.Oh,my mom was calling me! "Coming,mom!"I said. "Serena,I think you are so enough for witch.And..um..I think how about go to fairy godmother school?And I aways thought we'll moving to other country." my mom said."Fairy godmother?You want I do witch and fairy?Yeah,it's not too bad.But..how about my.."I said and mom inttuped. "Oh,dear.We are late!"And we ride our broomstick.We arrived in racing center. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-05-17 답변내용 Corrections: My friend,Sophia Kalen was go to broomstick racing,too! ✔ My friend, Sophia Kalen went to the broomstick racing,too! Sophia and I was very famouse witch in broomstick world. ✔ Sophia and I were very famous witches in the Broomstick world. Today is racing day. ✔ Today is the competition. My mom will pack my favorite snacks. ✔ My mom packed my favorite snacks. Oh,my mom was calling me! "Coming,mom!"I said. ✔ Oh, my mom was calling me! "Coming,mom!"I said. "Serena,I think you are so enough for witch.And..um..I think how about go to fairy godmother school?And I aways thought we'll moving to other country.g my mom said. ✔ "Serena, I think you are a great witch. I think you should go to the fairy godmother school. I always thought of moving from other country." my mom said. "Fairy godmother?You want I do witch and fairy?Yeah,it's not too bad.But..how about my.."I said ✔ "Fairy godmother? Do you want me to do the witchcraft and fairy stuffs? Yeah, it's not too bad but how about my.." I was interrupter by my mom saying. and mom inttuped. "Oh,dear.We are late!"And we ride our broomstick.We arrived in racing center. ✔ "Oh, dear we are late!" ✔ We used our broomsticks and arrived at the racing center.