1 We must turn off the lights to protect the energy. 2013-05-17 2 Go to the other country. 2013-01-24 3 The soccer time leader 2013-01-23 4 The movie. 2013-01-22 5 The wooden subway! 2013-01-13 6 The little boys modeling!!! 2013-01-10 7 What do you think about sigle term system? 2013-01-03 8 The naver and the happy bean site. 2013-01-02 9 A new year!!!! 2013-01-01 10 The holiday!!!!!!! 2012-12-24 1 2 3   회 원 이상기 작성일 2013-05-17 Weather    Feeling  Happy 제 목 We must turn off the lights to protect the energy. 내 용 Today we study about the lights. the bentley said we must protect the energy but the Anna said we must flashing lights on the rouds onthe buildings... But the bentley change his mind. Becouse he didn't think of turn off the champs elysees and the arc de triomphe. But my think is different with their. My opinion is to protect the energy by turn off the lights. It helps to save energy. a Becouse when we turn the lights at nights at outside it makes to wasted the energy. Also the lights are flashing it was sp shin so it make peaple eyes tired and make an car excident eigher. And when the light are flashing at road or churches building.... It is not way to protect the energy. in other words resently we didn't have energy. So we must protect the energy but peaple didn't. And someone eigher flashing the cars license plate!!!! It could the car ecxident eigher. So we must energy. But I think every one didn't like turn off buildings. But I can't understand that. Beacouse the building is and same buildings but people like an flashing buldings. They are not save the energy. They are so stupid for sure!!! 답변자 tc0069 답변일 2013-05-20 답변내용 Happy Monday, Bryan!^^* I understand your point. However, there are still some people who don't know how to save energy. Let's hope that they will be able to learn how to conserve energy. Take care, Bryan!*^_^* -=CORRECTIONS=- Today we study about the lights. = Today, we studied about lights. (add a punctuation mark) the bentley said we must protect the energy but the Anna said we must flashing lights on the rouds onthe buildings... = Bentley said that we must save energy, but Anna said that we must flash the lights on the buildings. (remove the determiners; correct usage: verb) But the bentley change his mind. Becouse he didn't think of turn off the champs elysees and the arc de triomphe. = What do you mean by this sentence, Bryan? But my think is different with their. = But my opinion is different from theirs. 9correct usage of expressions) My opinion is to protect the energy by turn off the lights. = I think we should conserve energy by turning off the lights. (correct usage of expressions) It helps to save energy. a Becouse when we turn the lights at nights at outside it makes to wasted the energy. = It will help us save energy because it will be useless to turn on the lights outside at night. (correct usage of expressions) Also the lights are flashing it was sp shin so it make peaple eyes tired and make an car excident eigher. = Also, the lights are flashing. It can make people's eyes tired and can cause some car accidents. (correct usage of expressions; correct spelling: peaple = people) And when the light are flashing at road or churches building.... It is not way to protect the energy. = Turning on the lights at night on the roads and churches, is not a way on how to save energy. (correct usage of expressiosn) in other words resently we didn't have energy. = In other words, people should save energy. 9correct usage of expressions) So we must protect the energy but peaple didn't. = We need to do it because people are not doing it. (correct usage of expressions) And someone eigher flashing the cars license plate!!!! = Moreover, some drivers are flashing the license plate of some cars. (correct usage of expressions) It could the car ecxident eigher. So we must energy. = It might cause car accident, so we must be careful. (correct usage of expressions) But I think every one didn't like turn off buildings. = But I think most people don't want the idea of turning off the lights at night on the roads and other tourist spots. (correct usage of expressions) But I can't understand that. Beacouse the building is and same buildings but people like an flashing buldings. = But I couldn't understand them because it is not too important to turn on the lights of the buildings. (corrct usage of expressions) They are not save the energy. = They are just wasting the energy. (correct usage of expressions) They are so stupid for sure!!! = I understand. Have a great week ahead, Bryan!*^_^*