1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-05-21 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 What about this? 내 용 Yesterday,Jenety was tell the her address to me.I was visit Jenety's house."Hey,Jenety!Let's go to the practicing broomstick race!"I shouted to Jenety."Alright,I'll go...eeeeeeek!"Jenety screamed.Handbill was fly right to Jenety. "What's happening?Are you okey,Jenety?"I asked to Jenety. "I'm okey.Just...handbill was attack me.Wait a second!"Jenety was ride her broomstick and through the window. "Pass that handbill,please."I said,gently. "Here you are.I think this is new car named 'Witchca modilan''s model...Hey,Serena how about this compatition?This handbill said,if you become a Witchca's model..you can take the a lot of witch money!How about this?Huh?"Jenety asked to me. I'm just thought for a long time. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-05-24 답변내용 Corrections: Yesterday,Jenety was tell the her address to me. ✔ Yesterday, Jenety told her address to me. I was visit Jenety's house. ✔ I visited Jenety's house. "Hey,Jenety!Let's go to the practicing broomstick race!"I shouted to Jenety. ✔ "Hey, Jenety! Let's go and practice on the broomstick race!" I shouted to Jenety. "Alright,I'll go...eeeeeeek!"Jenety screamed. = Correct Sentence Handbill was fly right to Jenety. ✔ Handbill flew right to Jenety. "What's happening?Are you okey,Jenety?"I asked to Jenety. ✔ "What's happening? Are you okay, Jenety?" I asked. "I'm okey.Just...handbill was attack me.Wait a second!" ✔ "I'm okay. Handbill attacked me. Wait a second!" Jenety was ride her broomstick and through the window. ✔ Jenety rode on her broomstick passed through the window. "Pass that handbill,please."I said,gently. ✔ "Pass that handbill, please." I said gently. "Here you are.I think this is new car named 'Witchca modilan''s model...Hey,Serena how about this compatition?This handbill said,if you become a Witchca's model..you can take the a lot of witch money!How about this?Huh?"Jenety asked to me. ✔ "Here you are. I think this is a new car named 'Witchca modilan's model' hey, Serena how about a competition? This handbill said,if you become a Witchca's model, you can take a lot of witch's money! How about a try? Huh?" Jenety asked. I'm just thought for a long time. ✔ I just thought about it for a long time.