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Debate competition
2019-04-12
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start of the week
2019-04-08
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cold and caugh
2019-04-05
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planning to make a new club
2019-03-25
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concerning
2019-03-14
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I want more time
2019-03-08
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Be thankful for all i've got now
2018-08-03
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my own credit card
2018-07-31
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After the field trip
2017-05-17
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Field trip
2017-05-16
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Be dark,they are burn the fire side. "Hey,you don't have any idea about this fire side?"Jenety asked. "Huh,what are you saying about?Idea about fire side...Hmmm,I have one words about fire side..Warm!"Misayo said. "Hmm..about fire side.Yeah,that idea is in my bag!Wait a minite.Please."I said.Jenety was smiled. I ran to the our tent and pull something in my bag.Ran again to our fire side place. "I'v got this!"I shouted.It was marshmallow with wood stick.
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Corrections: Be dark,they are burn the fire side. ✔ It's dark and there's camp fire. "Hey,you don't have any idea about this fire side?"Jenety asked. ✔ "Hey, do you any idea about the camp fire?"Jenety asked. "Huh,what are you saying about?Idea about fire side...Hmmm,I have one words about fire side..Warm!"Misayo said. ✔ "Huh, what are you saying? An idea about the camp fire, I think it's warm!" Misayo said. "Hmm..about fire side.Yeah,that idea is in my bag!Wait a minite.Please."I said.Jenety was smiled. ✔ "The idea is in my bag! Wait a minute, please." I said. ✔ Jenety was smiled. I ran to the our tent and pull something in my bag. Ran again to our fire side place. ✔ I ran inside the tent, pulled out something in my bag and ran back to the camp fire. "I'v got this!"I shouted. ✔ "I've got this!" I shouted. It was marshmallow with wood stick. ✔ It was a marshmallow on the wood stick.