1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-06-04 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Sweet shop! 내 용 "Hey,why are you screaming in my shop? And who are you?"the someone asked."You are..Arr..Arr.."Jenety stammered. "What are you saying?Arr..you want a visit Arty? Hey,I'm Arty."Arty said.That girl is Arty? Oh,my gosh! "Nice to meet you..Arty. I'm Serena Kura,this is Jenety Karyna and this is Misayo Komossy."I said. "Oh,My reall name is Artny Kindina Spot.Do you visit here for having you're own shop,when you are have time?"Arty said. "Umm...I'm not sure.My friend was propose the here. But if we can have our own shop,we'll make our boutique." I answered. "Allright!Please visit tomorrow again. My shop's time is over.Bye!"Arty was gone. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-06-04 답변내용 Corrections: "Hey,why are you screaming in my shop? And who are you?"the someone asked. ✔ "Hey,why are you screaming in my shop? Who are you?" someone asked. "You are..Arr..Arr.."Jenety stammered. ✔ "Are yo..you Arty?" Jenety stammered. "What are you saying?Arr..you want a visit Arty? Hey,I'm Arty."Arty said.That girl is Arty? Oh,my gosh! ✔ "What are you saying? Arty? Are you visiting her? Okay, I'm Arty" Arty said. "Nice to meet you..Arty. I'm Serena Kura,this is Jenety Karyna and this is Misayo Komossy."I said. ✔ "Nice to meet you, Arty. I'm Serena Kura, this is Jenety Karyna and Misayo Komossy," I said. "Oh,My reall name is Artny Kindina Spot.Do you visit here for having you're own shop,when you are have time?"Arty said. ✔ "Oh, my real name is Artny Kindina Spot. How did you know me?" Arty said. "Umm...I'm not sure.My friend was propose the here. But if we can have our own shop,we'll make our boutique." I answered. ✔ "A friend of mine told me about the place," I answered. "Allright!Please visit tomorrow again. My shop's time is over.Bye!"Arty was gone. ✔ "Alright! Please drop by tom. my shop is now closed, bye!" Arty said. ✔ Then, she was gone.