1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-06-11 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Thank you very much... 내 용 We are start to decorated Mary.First,Mary were her dress. Misayo take the pastel pink dress with pink ribbon belt. Then,Jenety was combed Mary's hair. And she put up Mary's hair. Last,make up time! It's my turn.I put face powder on her face. And I put on lipstick,eyeliner and other makeups. She was look like just.....snow white!She was very pretty. Mary was going to filming.Then, a little girl who look like same age to Mary,was coming inside the Mary's makeup room. "Oh,wh..who are...are you?Where is Mary?"girl asked. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-06-12 답변내용 Corrections: We are start to decorated Mary.First,Mary were her dress. ✔ We started to dress up Mary. Misayo take the pastel pink dress with pink ribbon belt. ✔ Misayo took the pastel pink dress with pink ribbon belt. Then,Jenety was combed Mary's hair. And she put up Mary's hair. ✔ Jenety combed Mary's hair and styled it. Last,make up time! ✔ Lastly, make-up time! It's my turn. = Correct Sentence I put face powder on her face. = Correct Sentence And I put on lipstick,eyeliner and other makeups. ✔ I put on lipstick, eyeliner and so on. She was look like just.....snow white! ✔ She looked like snow white! She was very pretty. = Correct Sentence Mary was going to filming. ✔ Mary went to the photo shoot in time. Then, a little girl who look like same age to Mary,was coming inside the Mary's makeup room. ✔ Then, a little girl who look like the same age with Mary, went inside Mary's dressing room. "Oh,wh..who are...are you?Where is Mary?"girl asked. ✔ "Oh, who are you? Where's Mary?" girl asked.