1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2013-07-08 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 #### 내 용 Title: monkey helpers are good for people? I think money helpers are good. It is because monkey helpers help hard people And they know there feel. Of course! Monkeys have right, too. But capuchin monkeys are good monkey helpers. Why? They can live 40 years and they friendly with their owner. Some people said “monkey helpers are just more than. They make me fun.” Therefore, monkey helpers help their owner fun. Also, monkey helpers help their everyday things, so hard people are very happy. Because they can do their works and they have best friends. Monkeys have talents to help their owner. This way is good for monkey helpers. Unit2 Title: comical holiday is good or bad to me? I think comical holiday is bad. It is because this is too comical. Comical holiday is including white day, valentine day and so on. This holiday is made from factories. Because they sell more product. And people bought expensive present. Thus, they use their all money. Also, who can’t get a chocolate or candy. This time they are sad. Girls want to more expensive present. Ah! Chocolate and candy is unhealthy. If you eat a lot, you will be getting a toothache or stomachache. And you can’t eat rice. Therefore, I think comical holiday is bad. Unit3 Title: how to fight back against peer pressure If I feel peer pressure, I will follow these ways. First, I do self reflection . Second, talk to parents. Third, make my good peer pressure. Fourth, self reflection again. First mean is reflection may wrong thing or bad thing. Second mean is talk to parents to say “ I feel peer pressure. How can I do?” Third mean is help bad students change to good students. Fourth mean is if I do wrong thing or bad thing, reflection again. Unit4 Title: America travel schedule Tour time: 5days Schedule 1days: arrive the America airport (meeting other people) and go to hotel 2days: free time in white house 3day: listen guide information white house. 4days: free time in dizny land 5days: arrive in Incheon airport Include Korea guide and America guide Not include America visa Unit5 Title: bird characteristic(특징) Bird has wings, beak, and so on. 1. Wings Bird uses their wings to fly. There are feather on the wings. Wing is very important. 2. Break Bird uses their break to eat food. Break is do sharp. So you can hurt their break. 3. How can bird fly? To put it simply, bird is very light. Their born is not heavy. Their born is light. It is because the born inside mad of many hole. And they have air pocket. These causes can bird fly. 4. Bird food Bird eats insect, meat and so on. Like a sorrow, woodpecker eat insect. But eagle eat animals meat. Yuck! 1. Monkey use there talent in this things? Monkeys are like people in many ways. They have a many talent . But some monkeys go to a calling and have train. So they help disable people. Monkey use there talent in this things? They don’t speak but they use stick for eating incest. They are more smarter then other animals. Some monkeys help disable people. They can brush there teethe give food and drink and so on. But it’s like a slave. Monkeys can live 40years but is not good to use there life in this things. Think about it. You have a lot of talent but nobody know that and say “Do work”. It unfair. Monkey can do a lot of things. Make monkey use there talent in other great thing. 2. Why the people make this celebrate day? White day, Valentine day………. . These celebrate day are not made by ratings or historical background. It is made by people who work in store or company. It’s made for there. Some people’s give candy in white day and give chocolate in Valentine day. Someone think I like that person so I give candy or chocolate. But this is not like Christmas or thanksgiving. I think this celebrate day is must stop. There is pepero day in Korea but this day is farmers day. I’ll never join this day. People must stop this celebrate day. 3. Do you know how can you get out of peer pressure? When you getting older you spend many time with your family. You can feel pressure your friend and you can think and behave like them. This is a peer pressure. You can feel pressure your bad friend. Once I’m get pressure the bad friend. Someday I know that is a bad thing. And now I have many good friends. To put it simple I came out bad behave. There is a way of get out bad peer pressure. When bad friend tease you don’t think about them. Ignore them I do it today. When you angry about them and do it like them, they think it’s funny and do more. When you do it like good friend maybe they doing good things and so on. Then you can do like them. 4. Interesting England Tour! *The journey of England* Day 1 to 2: take a plan at Korea and go to England. Day 3: go to the tower bridge. (Tower bridge is located between the tower. When ship come it’s go up and cars came it’s go down.) Day 4: go to a Big Bang top. (Big clock is in the to of the building.) Day 5 to 6: take a plan and go to Korea. 5. Bird Some people think they have wing they can fly. But they can’t fly. Bird can fly. They have to fly so there weight must light. So air is in a born. There is nothing in born. Some birds can’t fly such as chicken penguin, ostrich, peacock, duck, parrot and so on. There is an endangered bird. Such as dodo, passenger pigeon, magpie ducks and so on. If we protect environment there is no endangered birds. 답변자 tc0092 답변일 2013-07-08 답변내용 Title: monkey helpers are good for people? >> no correction ^^ I think money helpers are good. >> no correction ^^ It is because monkey helpers help hard people >> It is because monkey helpers help people who are having a difficult life. And they know there feel. >> They know how they feel. Of course! Monkeys have right, too. >> Of course! Monkeys have rights, too. But capuchin monkeys are good monkey helpers. >> Capuchin monkeys are good monkey helpers. Why? They can live 40 years and they friendly with their owner. >> Why? It's because they can live up to 40 years and they are friendly with their owners. Some people said “monkey helpers are just more than. They make me fun.” >> Some people say, "monkey helpers are more than what they are. They are fun!" Therefore, monkey helpers help their owner fun. >> Therefore, monkey helpers help their owners to have fun. Also, monkey helpers help their everyday things, so hard people are very happy. >> Also, monkey helpers help with their owners' daily activities, so people who are having a hard time are very happy. Because they can do their works and they have best friends. >> It's because they can finish their work faster and they have their bestfriends. Monkeys have talents to help their owner. >> Monkeys have the talent to help their owners. This way is good for monkey helpers. >> This is what's good with monkey helpers. Unit2 >> no correction ^^ Title: comical holiday is good or bad to me? >> Title: comical holiday is good or bad for me? I think comical holiday is bad. >> no correction ^^ It is because this is too comical. >> no correction ^^ Comical holiday is including white day, valentine day and so on. >> Comical holiday includes White Day, Valentine's Day, and many more. This holiday is made from factories. >> These holidays were created by factory owners. Because they sell more product. >> They made these so that they could sell more of their products. And people bought expensive present. >> People are buying expensive presents. Thus, they use their all money. >> Thus, they use almost all their money. Also, who can’t get a chocolate or candy. This time they are sad. >> Also, those who don't get chocolates or candies on these days feel very sad. Girls want to more expensive present. >> Girls want more expensive presents. Ah! Chocolate and candy is unhealthy. >> Ah! Chocolates and candies are unhealthy. If you eat a lot, you will be getting a toothache or stomachache. >> If you eat a lot of these stuff, you'll get a toothache or a stomachache. And you can’t eat rice. >> You won't have an appetite for rice, too. Therefore, I think comical holiday is bad. >> no correction ^^ Unit3 >> no correction ^^ Title: how to fight back against peer pressure >> no correction ^^ If I feel peer pressure, I will follow these ways. >> no correction ^^ First, I do self reflection . >> First, I will do self reflection. Second, talk to parents. >> Second, I will talk to my parents. Third, make my good peer pressure. >> Third, I'll try to make good peer pressure. Fourth, self reflection again. >> Fourth, I will undergo self reflection again. First mean is reflection may wrong thing or bad thing. >> The first means I'll have to reflect in the wrong or bad things that I've done. Second mean is talk to parents to say “ I feel peer pressure. How can I do?” ?? >> What I mean with the second step is I'll tak to my parents and ask them, "I am having peer pressure. What can I do about it?" Third mean is help bad students change to good students. >> What I mean with the third one is I'll try to change bad students into good ones. Fourth mean is if I do wrong thing or bad thing, reflection again. >> Fourth means I'll have to do another reflection if I get to do something wrong or bad again. Unit4 >> no correction ^^ Title: America travel schedule >> no correction ^^ Tour time: 5days >> no correction ^^ Schedule >> no correction ^^ 1days: arrive the America airport (meeting other people) and go to hotel >> Day1: arrive at the American airport (meeting other people) and go to hotel 2days: free time in white house >> Day2: free time at the White House 3day: listen guide information white house. >> Day3: Listen to the White House guide while he/she is relaying information 4days: free time in dizny land >> Day4: Free time in Disney Land. 5days: arrive in Incheon airport >> Day5: arrive at Incheon International Airport Include Korea guide and America guide >> I should include a Korean and American guide in my luggage. Not include America visa >> I shouldn't include an American visa. Unit5 >> no correction ^^ Title: bird characteristic(특징) >> no correction ^^ Bird has wings, beak, and so on. >> A bird has wings, a beak, and so on. 1. Wings >> no correction ^^ Bird uses their wings to fly. >> Birds use their wings to fly. There are feather on the wings. >> There are feathers on their wings. Wing is very important. >> Wings are very important. 2. Break >> Beak Bird uses their break to eat food. >> Birds use their beak to eat food. Break is do sharp. >> Beaks are sharp. So you can hurt their break. >> Thus, you can get hurt with their beaks. 3. How can bird fly? >> How can a bird fly? To put it simply, bird is very light. >> To put it simply, a bird is very light. Their born is not heavy. >> Their bodies are not heavy. Their born is light. >> Their bodies are very light. It is because the born inside mad of many hole. >> It is because their bodies are made up of a lot of holes inside. And they have air pocket. >> They also have air pockets. These causes can bird fly. >> These are the reasons why birds can fly. 4. Bird food >> no correction ^^ Bird eats insect, meat and so on. >> Birds eat insects, meat, and so on. Like a sorrow, woodpecker eat insect. >> Like a sparrow, woodpeckers eat insects. But eagle eat animals meat. >> However, eagles eat animal's meat. Yuck! >> no correction ^^ 1. Monkey use there talent in this things? >> Monkeys use their talents in these situations. Monkeys are like people in many ways. >> no correction ^^ They have a many talent . >> They have a lot of talents. But some monkeys go to a calling and have train. >> However, some monkeys can obey callings and they can be trained. So they help disable people. >> Thus, they can help disabled people. Monkey use there talent in this things? >> Monkeys use their talents in these situations. They don’t speak but they use stick for eating incest. >> They don't speak, but they use sticks to catch and eat insects. They are more smarter then other animals. >> They are smarter than the other animals. Some monkeys help disable people. >> Somemonkeys help disabled people. They can brush there teethe give food and drink and so on. >> They can brush their teeth, give food and drinks, and so on. But it’s like a slave. >> However, they are like slaves. Monkeys can live 40years but is not good to use there life in this things. >> Monkeys can live up to 40 years, but it is not a good thing to use them as slaves for their entire lives. Think about it. >> no correction ^^ You have a lot of talent but nobody know that and say “Do work”. It unfair. >> You have a lot of talent, but nobody knows that. Instead, they keep on ordering you to work. It's unfair. Monkey can do a lot of things. >> Monkeys can do a lot of things. Make monkey use there talent in other great thing. >> Make monkeys use their talents in greater ways. 2. Why the people make this celebrate day? >> Why did people make these holidays? White day, Valentine day………. . >> no correction ^^ These celebrate day are not made by ratings or historical background. >> These celebrations weren't made because of rating or history. It is made by people who work in store or company. >> They were made by people who worked at stores or companies. It’s made for there. >> These holidays were made for them. Some people’s give candy in white day and give chocolate in Valentine day. >> Some people give candies on White Day and give chocolaes on Valentine's Day. Someone think I like that person so I give candy or chocolate. >> Someone might think, 'I like that person, so I'll give him.her candies or chocolates." But this is not like Christmas or thanksgiving. >> Howver, these are not like Christmas or Thanksgiving. I think this celebrate day is must stop. >> I think these hilidays should be stopped. There is pepero day in Korea but this day is farmers day. >> There is Pepero Day in Korea, but it is actually Farmer's Day. I’ll never join this day. >> no correction ^^ People must stop this celebrate day. >> People must stop these holidays. 3. Do you know how can you get out of peer pressure? >> Do you know how to get out of peer pressure? When you getting older you spend many time with your family. >> When you are getting older, you must spend more time with your family. You can feel pressure your friend and you can think and behave like them. >> You can feel peer pressure from your friends and you might start to think and behave like them. This is a peer pressure. >> no correction ^^ You can feel pressure your bad friend. >> You can feel peer pressure from bad friends. Once I’m get pressure the bad friend. >> Once, I experienced feeling pressured by a bad friend. Someday I know that is a bad thing. >> Somehow, I knew that it was a bad thing. And now I have many good friends. >> Now, I have a lot of good friends. To put it simple I came out bad behave. >> To put it simply, I overcame peer pressure from my bad friend. There is a way of get out bad peer pressure. >> There is a way to overcome bad peer pressure. When bad friend tease you don’t think about them. >> When a bad friend teases you, don't think about what he/she is saying about you. Ignore them I do it today. >> Ignore them. When you angry about them and do it like them, they think it’s funny and do more. >> When you become angry and try to do the same thing to them, they would think that it's funny and they will do it again. When you do it like good friend maybe they doing good things and so on. >> When you behave like a good friend, perhaps, they could change for the better, too. Then you can do like them. >> Then, you can start following their behavior. 4. Interesting England Tour! >> no correction ^^ *The journey of England* >> *The journey to England* Day 1 to 2: take a plan at Korea and go to England. >> Day 1~2: make a plan in Korea and go to England. Day 3: go to the tower bridge. (Tower bridge is located between the tower. When ship come it’s go up and cars came it’s go down.) >> Day 3: go to the tower bridge. (Tower bridge is located between the towers. When a ship comes it goes up and when cars come it goes down.) Day 4: go to a Big Bang top. (Big clock is in the to of the building.) >> Day 4: go to the Big Bang's top. (The big clock is on top of a building.) Day 5 to 6: take a plan and go to Korea. >> Day 5 to 6: make a plan and go to Korea. 5. Bird >> no correction ^^ Some people think they have wing they can fly. >> Some people think that they have wings and that they can fly. But they can’t fly. >> However, they can't fly. Bird can fly. >> Birds can fly. They have to fly so there weight must light. >> They have to fly, so their weight must be light. So air is in a born. >> Thus, there is air in their bodies. (?) There is nothing in born. >> There is nothing in their bodies. (?) Some birds can’t fly such as chicken penguin, ostrich, peacock, duck, parrot and so on. >> Some birds can’t fly such as chicken, penguin, ostrich, peacock, duck, parrot, and so on. There is an endangered bird. >> There are endangered species of birds. Such as dodo, passenger pigeon, magpie ducks and so on. >> These are dodo, passenger pigeon, magpie ducks, and so on. If we protect environment there is no endangered birds. >> If we protect our environment, there won't be any endangered species of birds. To Koma's mother, I'm sorry, but I don't understand what you mean by 'born'. I'm not sure with the corrections that I've made for them. Ann