1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-07-18 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 About my BF friends. 내 용 Hi,teacher^^ My Best friends are Hannah,Sera,Alitha and Jiwon. Hannah was born in America island,Guam. In 4th grade,we met in church.She is short and small. But she is very good friend to me. She was going back to her hometown.I missed her.-A- Sera was love cats.She have two cats. Their names are Coco and Cici. We met each other when we are second grade. She was really really kind and she is perfect friends to me. Alitha is little bit obstinate. She was very good at art.She was good friend,too! Last,Jiwon is very good at English. Because she live in America a little while. Those friends are very good to me!! Good night,teacher Alison^^ 답변자 tc0124 답변일 2013-07-22 답변내용 Hi,teacher^^ My Best friends are Hannah,Sera,Alitha and Jiwon. >> correct << Hannah was born in America island,Guam. >> Hannah was born in American island, Guam. In 4th grade,we met in church. >> When I was in 4th grade, we met in church. She is short and small. >> correct << But she is very good friend to me. >> But she is very good friend of mine. She was going back to her hometown.I missed her.-A- >> She already went back to her hometown. I miss her. Sera was love cats.She have two cats. >> Sera loves cat. She have two cats. Their names are Coco and Cici. >> correct << We met each other when we are second grade. >> We met each other when we were in second grade. She was really really kind and she is perfect friends to me. >> She is really really kind and she is a perfect friend for me. Alitha is little bit obstinate. >> correct << She was very good at art.She was good friend,too! >> She is very good at art. She is a good friend too. Last,Jiwon is very good at English. >> Lastly, is Jiwon. She is very good at English. Because she live in America a little while. >> It's because she lived in a America for a little while. Those friends are very good to me!! >> correct << ***** Hi Esther, I'm glad that you always write in your diary. You write well, but you have to be careful when you use past, present and future tense. I've noticed that you always use "was" in your sentence. When things already happen that's the time you will write your words in past tense. "Was" is a past tense.