1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2013-07-23 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Royal Baby Borned 내 용 Today the baby was born in the England. Finally, the royal baby who will be the king of the England is born. I was kind of surprised. It was kind of awesome. I hope the baby will grow well. according to the news every people were celebrating royal family of England. I actually didn't know that they had a baby. Whatever, I hope they will live happily. I'm sure that if the baby grow soon, there will be a huge fight. The wolrd is celebrating the royal baby(actually, the England should be thankful to me because it was a girl, but I changed it to the boy, because I'm a god.) hahaha, I'm so genius 답변자 Addie 답변일 2013-07-24 답변내용 Today the baby was born in the England. [Today,] the [royal] baby was born [in England.] Finally, the royal baby who will be the king of the England is born. Finally, the royal baby who will be the [King of England was] born. I was kind of surprised. [Correct!] It was kind of awesome. [Correct!] I hope the baby will grow well. [Correct!] according to the news every people were celebrating royal family of England. [According] to the [news, everyone was] celebrating [the Royal Family] of England. I actually didn't know that they had a baby. [Correct!] Whatever, I hope they will live happily. [Correct!] I'm sure that if the baby grow soon, there will be a huge fight. I'm sure that if the baby [grows] soon, there will be a huge fight. The wolrd is celebrating the royal baby The [world] is celebrating the royal [baby.] (actually, the England should be thankful to me because it was a girl, but I changed it to the boy, because I'm a god.) hahaha, I'm so genius ([Actually, England] should be thankful to me because it was a girl, but I changed it to [a boy because] I'm a [God. Hahaha, I'm [a genius.)] Notes: 1. Please use proper punctuation marks for your sentences. 2. Always remember to use capital letters to start a proper noun. 3. Any word that comes at the beginning of the sentence is capitalized. 4. Please focus on the proper use of articles. Hi Stiven! Thanks for sharing your thoughts! ^^ - Teacher Tracy