1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2013-07-30 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 sports management 내 용 I watched a program about sports management on tv. I watched it because it is my dream. I was interested in Mark Maccommak who built IMG. This company was pretty famous. I didn't know that Tiger woods was in that company getting managed. but he quit. Whatever, I was really interested in it. I also respect Scott Borras.He was such a great person who made the most expansive player in the world. By him, korea's best baseball player shin soo Choo made a deal with cleveland indians. But many players are complaining about him, because he doesn't care alot about his players. He only looks forward for more players who need his help. The person who I don't like was MArk Maccomak. I was interested in him, but when I heard about the stress when IMG become the general management company, I started to hate him. I could understand Tiger Woods.Who has left IMG. and I knew that it's very silly to become a member of it by Arnold Palmer. He said IMG is such a devil. The most suspicious thing that I can't understand, is almost every sports players want to go to IMG, and IMG is one of the biggest and strongest sports management company that it helds a wimbolden biritish open and australia open. I think I should try to become a sports manager who can communicate with my players and make a highest price as I can for my visitors or players. 답변자 Addie 답변일 2013-08-01 답변내용 I watched a program about sports management on tv. I watched a program about sports management on [TV.] I watched it because it is my dream. [Correct!] I was interested in Mark Maccommak who built IMG. I [am] interested in Mark [McCormack] who built IMG. This company was pretty famous. This company [is] pretty famous. I didn't know that Tiger woods was in that company getting managed. but he quit. I didn't know that Tiger [Woods was managed by that company but] he quit. Whatever, I was really interested in it. Whatever, I [am] really interested in it. I also respect Scott Borras. I also respect Scott [Boras.] He was such a great person who made the most expansive player in the world. He [is] such a great person who made the most [expensive] player in the world. By him, korea's best baseball player shin soo Choo made a deal with cleveland indians. [It is because of him why Korea's] best baseball [player, Shin-Soo Choo,] made a deal with [Cleveland Indians.] But many players are complaining about him, because he doesn't care alot about his players. But many players are complaining about [him because] he doesn't care [a lot] about his players. He only looks forward for more players who need his help. He only [looks for] more players who need his help. The person who I don't like was MArk Maccomak. The person who I don't like [is Mark [McCormack.] I was interested in him, but when I heard about the stress when IMG become the general management company, I started to hate him. I [am] interested in [him but] when I heard [about IMG becoming a] general management company, I started to hate him. I could understand Tiger Woods.Who has left IMG.and I knew that it's very silly to become a member of it by Arnold Palmer. I [can] understand [why] Tiger [Woods left IMG and] I [know] that it's very silly to become a member of it [because of] Arnold Palmer. He said IMG is such a devil. [Correct!] The most suspicious thing that I can't understand, is almost every sports players want to go to IMG, and IMG is one of the biggest and strongest sports management company that it helds a wimbolden biritish open and australia open. The most suspicious thing that I can't [understand is that almost] every sports players want to go to [IMG and] IMG is one of the biggest and strongest sports management [company. It hosts the Wimbledon and Australian Open.] I think I should try to become a sports manager who can communicate with my players and make a highest price as I can for my visitors or players. **What do you mean by "highest price"? Notes: 1. Be careful with your spelling. 2. Please be careful with your verb tenses. 3. Observe proper word choices. Hi Stiven! Thanks for sharing! - Teacher Tracy