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I watched a movie named Captain America. I think it was pretty good movie. It was not very funny though, it was just impressive. I liked Chris Avans' acting. I think it would be more better if I watched on movie theather. I heard that this movie was made really fast and roughly to make avengers as fast as they could. But for me story was really interesting and exciting. I thought that it was much better than Thor and Hulk. BUt I think Iron man was the best among the marvel comics. I think it was pretty good. I especially like a girl whose name was peggie. She was really pretty, but not more than me kkk
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I watched a movie named Captain America. I think it was pretty good movie. I think it was [a] pretty good movie. It was not very funny though, it was just impressive. [Correct!] I liked Chris Avans' acting. I liked Chris [Evans'] acting. I think it would be more better if I watched on movie theather. I think it would [have been better] if I watched [it in the] movie [theater.] I heard that this movie was made really fast and roughly to make avengers as fast as they could. [Correct!] But for me story was really interesting and exciting. But for [me, the] story was really interesting and exciting. I thought that it was much better than Thor and Hulk. [Correct!] BUt I think Iron man was the best among the marvel comics. [But] I think Iron man was the best among the marvel comics. I think it was pretty good. [Correct!] I especially like a girl whose name was peggie. I especially like [the] girl whose name was [Peggy.] She was really pretty, but not more than me kkk She was really pretty, but not more than [me.] Notes: 1. Always remember to use capital letters to start a proper noun. 2. Please focus on the proper use of articles and prepositions. Hi Stiven! Thanks for sharing! - Teacher Tracy