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2013-08-19
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Yesterday, I got caught by my mom that I played with my friends. I told my mom that I should go to academy and I went to m friends house and played play station. I never thought that I could get caught, because it was kind of well made plan. I actually never succeeded it, and I realized that I can never succeed. I got a lot of blame. I was also hit by dad.It was really painful. I think I should not have done that. I also got caught that I was not writing my diary. I didn't knew that I will get caught about that also. I was kind of surprised because my mom told me to put my knees on to the bathroon floor really scary. I was kind of shocked. I can't expect what will be happening to me. It seems that I can't live anymore in this class. My mom told me that let's see what will happen when she comes out from the bathroom. I hate this feeling. Oh god, why did you make this kind of bad situation for me. I hope I can pass this problems without any problem. I seriousl hate this kind of feeling. I hope nothinh bad will happen to me
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2013-08-20
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Yesterday, I got caught by my mom that I played with my friends. Yesterday, I got caught by my mom [playing] with my friends. I told my mom that I should go to academy and I went to m friends house and played play station. I told my mom that I should go to [the] academy [but] I went to [my friend's] house and played [PlayStation.] I never thought that I could get caught, because it was kind of well made plan. I never thought that I [would] get [caught because] it was [a] kind of well made plan. I actually never succeeded it, and I realized that I can never succeed. I actually never [succeeded, and] I realized that I [will] never succeed. I got a lot of blame. I got [blamed a lot.] I was also hit by dad. [Correct!] It was really painful. [Correct!] I think I should not have done that. [Correct!] I also got caught that I was not writing my diary. I [was] also got [caught not] writing my diary. I didn't knew that I will get caught about that also. I didn't [know] that I [would] get caught about that also. I was kind of surprised because my mom told me to put my knees on to the bathroon floor really scary. I was kind of surprised because my mom told me to put my knees [on the bathroom floor. It was] really scary. I was kind of shocked. [Correct!] I can't expect what will be happening to me. I [didn't know] what [would happen] to me. It seems that I can't live anymore in this class. [Correct!] My mom told me that let's see what will happen when she comes out from the bathroom. My mom told me [to] see what [would] happen when she comes out from the bathroom. I hate this feeling. [Correct!] Oh god, why did you make this kind of bad situation for me. Oh [God,] why did you make this kind of bad situation for [me?] I hope I can pass this problems without any problem. I hope I can pass [these] problems without any problem. I seriousl hate this kind of feeling. I[seriously] hate this kind of feeling. I hope nothinh bad will happen to me I hope [nothing] bad will happen to [me.] Notes: 1. Be careful with your spelling. 2. Always remember to capitalized a proper noun. 3. Use proper punctuation marks for your sentences. Hi Stiven! I'm very sorry to hear about what happened. I hope you won't lie to your parents again. Thanks for sharing! - Teacher Tracy