1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2013-08-19 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 The terror live 내 용 About two weeks ago, I watched a movie named The Terror live in the cinema. It was kind of scary movie. But the whole story is well made. I think that terrorist plans his work very well. There were some cruel scenes in this movie but, It was cool. Actually the terrorist was kind of poor people. and one roadcasting system named SNC directly talked with Terrorist whose name was Park No Kyu. and in the news, the headman of police came and had a fight with terrorist with the phone. And the anker and police were wearing bomb in their ears for earphones, and that was a bomb. Actually terrorist broke down the korea's one of the largest bridge named MafoDaegyo. whatever, the police's bomb exploded and their was a big hole in his head.I think he deserved it because he had such a bad attitude to the terrorist. and Finally, the anker's wife died because of terror. and also a lot of police died. I was really afraid at this situations. pretty scary you know. and the terrorist died because of police's shooting. but anker got mad about world too. and he mad another terror which is breaking down the building of SNC. 답변자 Addie 답변일 2013-08-21 답변내용 About two weeks ago, I watched a movie named The Terror live in the cinema. About two weeks ago, I watched a movie named The Terror [Live] in the cinema. It was kind of scary movie. It was kind of [a] scary movie. But the whole story is well made. [However,]the whole story [was] well made. I think that terrorist plans his work very well. I think [the] terrorist [planned] his work very well. There were some cruel scenes in this movie but, It was cool. There were some cruel scenes in this [movie, but it] was cool. Actually the terrorist was kind of poor people. and one roadcasting system named SNC directly talked with Terrorist whose name was Park No Kyu. [Actually,] the terrorist was kind of [a poor person and] one [broadcasting] system named SNC directly talked with [the terrorist] whose name was Park No Kyu. and in the news, the headman of police came and had a fight with terrorist with the phone. [In the] news, the [head of the police] came and had a fight with [the] terrorist [on] the phone And the anker and police were wearing bomb in their ears for earphones, and that was a bomb. [The anchor] and [the policeman's earphones had bombs.] Actually terrorist broke down the korea's one of the largest bridge named MafoDaegyo. [Actually, the] terrorist broke [down one of the largest bridges in Korea] named [Mapodaegyo.] whatever, the police's bomb exploded and their was a big hole in his head. [Whatever,] the [policeman's] bomb exploded and [there] was a big hole in his head. I think he deserved it because he had such a bad attitude to the terrorist. [Correct!] and Finally, the anker's wife died because of terror. and also a lot of police died. [Finally,] the [anchor's] wife died because of [terror and also,] a lot of [policemen] died. I was really afraid at this situations. I was really afraid at [these] situations. pretty scary you know. [It was] pretty [scary, you] know. and the terrorist died because of police's shooting. [The] terrorist died because [he got shot by the police.] but anker got mad about world too. [However, the anchor] got mad [to the] world too. and he mad another terror which is breaking down the building of SNC [He was] mad [that] another [terror attack will happen,] which is breaking down the building of [SNC.] Notes: 1. Please be careful with your spelling. 2. Use proper punctuation marks for your sentences. 3. Always capitalized the first word of the sentence. Hi Stiven! It sounds like a good movie. ^^ Thanks for sharing! - Teacher Tracy