1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2013-08-19 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Art Exhibition 내 용 I went to art exhibition 2weeks ago. It was really sad. I wanted to play actually, but couldn't. Whatever, I went to the exhibition about Alponse mucha. I think he loved girls too much. All of his drawings were girls. Some were nood, and Some were too ugly. I actually didn't know about mucha before I go to the exhibition too see this. But I knew who he is now. Who loves girls but kind of succesful artist for slave tribes. I don't think that he was such a great artist such like Pablo Picasso or Vincent Van gogh. I think his drawings were not good as other painters. In that museum, because of mucha, the mucha style was made, but I dodn't think so. I think his drawing were more likely to be Van gogh style. I'm not saying that his drawings were not good. I hope there will be easier guide tape audio for visitors in exhibition. I found it very hard to find pictures which the tape was explaining. The thing I liked was that the pictures sizes were big. and kind of bright. Maybe he tired to cheer up even though he is drawing really gloomy pictures. We might have to respect his positive action and working for is country really hard. Maybe it would be better if he drew some boys. 답변자 Addie 답변일 2013-08-20 답변내용 I went to art exhibition 2weeks ago. I went to [an] art exhibition [two weeks] ago. It was really sad. [Correct!] I wanted to play actually, but couldn't. I wanted to play actually, but [I] couldn't. Whatever, I went to the exhibition about Alponse mucha. Whatever, I went to the exhibition [of Alphonse Mucha.] I think he loved girls too much. [Correct!] All of his drawings were girls. [Correct!] Some were nood, and Some were too ugly. Some were [good and some] were too ugly. I actually didn't know about mucha before I go to the exhibition too see this. I actually didn't know about [Mucha] before I [went] to the [exhibition.] But I knew who he is now. But I [know] who he is now. Who loves girls but kind of succesful artist for slave tribes. [He loved] girls [and he was a] kind of [successful] artist for slave tribes. I don't think that he was such a great artist such like Pablo Picasso or Vincent Van gogh. I don't think that he was such a great artist such [as] Pablo Picasso or Vincent Van [Googh.] I think his drawings were not good as other painters. I think his drawings were not [as] good as other [painters'.] In that museum, because of mucha, the mucha style was made, but I dodn't think so. [Because of Mucha, the Mucha style was made in that museum,] but I [don't] think so. I think his drawing were more likely to be Van gogh style. I think his [drawings] were more likely to be Van [Gogh's] style. I'm not saying that his drawings were not good. [Correct!] I hope there will be easier guide tape audio for visitors in exhibition. I hope there will be [an] easier [audio tape] guide for [the] visitors in [the] exhibition. I found it very hard to find pictures which the tape was explaining. I found it very hard to find [the picture] which the tape was explaining. The thing I liked was that the pictures sizes were big. and kind of bright. The thing I liked was that the [pictures'] sizes were [big and] kind of bright. Maybe he tired to cheer up even though he is drawing really gloomy pictures. Maybe he [tried] to cheer [himself up] even though he [was] drawing really gloomy pictures. We might have to respect his positive action and working for is country really hard. We might have to respect his positive [actions] and [works] [for is country really hard. - *What do you mean by this?] Maybe it would be better if he drew some boys. Maybe it would [have been] better if he drew some boys. Notes: 1. Please observe proper word choices. 2. Always capitalized a proper noun. 3. Please observe the proper use of articles and prepositions. Hi Stiven! Thanks so much for sharing! ^^ - Teacher Tracy