1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2013-08-19 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Father's company. 내 용 Today, I went to my father's comapny which name is LH. I am very proud of this because it is one of the biggest public company which government made. also, my father is kind of high person in this company. Also father is doing really importnat work for Sejong City where all of government(except President's house) will move. He seems to be busy. There was also a museum name Land and House museum. It was pretty big too. It also had a lot of things in there and a lot of people too. and I went to my friends father's office. It was extremely hot. Because of Korea Electricity company's saving energy mission, they could not turn on the air conditioner and light. So we came out and ate lunch at restaurant. It was really not delicious. I hated it. There was noting to eat. That's why I ate some chips and drinks in the supermarket on the 2nd floor. I thought the company was going to be bankrupt. In the front of the door, there was a plan card saying the president of LH sould not be a president. Because of him we did unhelpful change and more buisiness man were fired. I was kind of surprised. and my friend was kind of surprised too, but we didn't have to worry, because it was not plancard of LH. It was other citizen groups. I hope my father will be a the presidnet of LH one day 답변자 Addie 답변일 2013-08-21 답변내용 Today, I went to my father's comapny which name is LH. Today, I went to my father's [company, LH.] I am very proud of this because it is one of the biggest public company which government made. I am very proud of this because it is one of the biggest public [companies] which [the] government made. also, my father is kind of high person in this company. [My father is also a] kind of [a high] person in this company. Also father is doing really importnat work for Sejong City where all of government(except President's house) will move. [My father is also doing really [important works] for Sejong City where all [government offices] (except [the President's office])will [be moved.] He seems to be busy. [Correct!] There was also a museum name Land and House museum. There [is a] museum [named] Land and House [Museum.] It was pretty big too. It was pretty [big.] It also had a lot of things in there and a lot of people too. and I went to my friends father's office. It also had a lot of [things inside and] a lot of [people, too. I also] went to my [friend's] father's office. It was extremely hot. [Correct!] Because of Korea Electricity company's saving energy mission, they could not turn on the air conditioner and light. [It was because] of [Korea's] electricity company's [mission to save energy,] they could not turn on the air conditioner and [lights.] So we came out and ate lunch at restaurant. So we came out and ate lunch at [a] restaurant. It was really not delicious. [Correct!] I hated it. [Correct!] There was noting to eat. [Correct!] That's why I ate some chips and drinks in the supermarket on the 2nd floor. That's why I ate some chips and drinks in the supermarket on the [second] floor. I thought the company was going to be bankrupt. [Correct!] In the front of the door, there was a plan card saying the president of LH sould not be a president. [In front] of the door, there was a [placard] saying the president of LH [should] not be [the] president. Because of him we did unhelpful change and more buisiness man were fired. [It was because] of him [why] we did unhelpful [changes] and more [businessmen] were fired. I was kind of surprised. [Correct!] and my friend was kind of surprised too, but we didn't have to worry, because it was not plancard of LH. [My] friend was kind of [surprised, too,] but we didn't have to [worry because] it was not [a placard from] LH. It was other citizen groups. It was [from] other citizen groups. I hope my father will be a the presidnet of LH one day I hope my father will be a the [president] of LH one [day.] Notes: 1. Be careful with your spelling. 2. Use proper punctuation marks for your sentences. Hi Stiven! I hope you're dad becomes LH's president in the future. ^^ Thanks for sharing! - Teacher Tracy