1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2013-08-26 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 EnR 내 용 Finally, I moved my english academy to Enr. Actually, I didn't want to go here because this academy was really famous for a lot of homework and stress. But sadly, I became a student of Enr.(Enr means English and Revolution). I thought it will be terrible since the first day, so I was really worrying, but it was not that terrible. I think they were kind because of this was the 1st day in this academy. I heard that teacher is really scary. but she used kind of good word and being kind to me. She even gave me a snack. It was so delicious. I ate 3 cookies in there. However, all of the students told me that if one moth pass, I will experience hell. I was shockied after that. I hope I won't be rest until 10'o clock. Then I will complain to my mom that this academy is so sucks that I can't overcome with those kind of homework, and stress. I want to go back to my old academy. I regret that I didn't took the vocabulary test every time. I think my life is becoming darker and darker. It's the sad truth that my mom will send me to other place if I don't do well in this academy. God why are you avoiding me?ㅠㅠㅠ 답변자 Addie 답변일 2013-08-27 답변내용 Finally, I moved my english academy to Enr. Finally, I moved [to a new English] academy [called EnR.] Actually, I didn't want to go here because this academy was really famous for a lot of homework and stress. Actually, I didn't want to go here because this academy [is] really famous for [giving] a lot of homework and stress. But sadly, I became a student of Enr.(Enr means English and Revolution). [However,] sadly, I became a student of [EnR.] [(EnR means English and [Revolution.)] I thought it will be terrible since the first day, so I was really worrying, but it was not that terrible. I thought it [would] be terrible [on] the first day, so I was really [worried,] but it was not that terrible. I think they were kind because of this was the 1st day in this academy. I think they were kind because [it] was [my first] day in [the] academy. I heard that teacher is really scary. I heard that [the] teacher is really scary. but she used kind of good word and being kind to me. [However,] she used kind of good [words and was] being kind to me. She even gave me a snack. [Correct!] It was so delicious. [Correct!] I ate 3 cookies in there. I ate [three cookies there.] However, all of the students told me that if one moth pass, I will experience hell. However, all of the students told me that [when] one [month has passed,] I will experience hell. I was shockied after that. I was [shocked] after [hearing] that. I hope I won't be rest until 10'o clock. I hope I won't [stay in the academy] until [ten o'clock.] Then I will complain to my mom that this academy is so sucks that I can't overcome with those kind of homework, and stress. [Or else,] I will complain to my mom that this [academy sucks,] that I can't [handle] those kind of homework, and stress. I want to go back to my old academy. [Correct!] I regret that I didn't took the vocabulary test every time. I regret that I didn't [take] the vocabulary [test.] *What do you mean by "every time"? I think my life is becoming darker and darker. [Correct!] It's the sad truth that my mom will send me to other place if I don't do well in this academy. [Correct!] God why are you avoiding me?ㅠㅠㅠ [God,] why are you avoiding me? ㅠㅠㅠ Notes: 1. Please use proper punctuation marks for your sentences. 2. Please observe proper word choices. 3. Please be careful with your verb tenses. Hi Stiven! Thank you for sharing! If you're a good student, I'm sure your academy teacher won't give you a hard time. You can do it! ^^ - Teacher Tracy