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If I tell the truth, A person who is really famomous in playing game. His nickname is cloud templar. He is the main jungler(position) in CJ Entus Frost. He is my mom's cousin. I'm kind of proud. Actually he was in not good mood nowadays.But Finally, he did such a great job last game which happened yesterday.It was the 3rd set which is the last set. The enemy KT Bullets, They took the 1st set, but Frost took 2,3rd set. I was so happy. Almost every people were saying good thing about Madlife(anothe player-supporter), Cloud templar(jungler) Shy( another Player -top). I hope everyone will do well.
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If I tell the truth, A person who is really famomous in playing game. If I tell the truth, [a] person who is really [famous] in playing game. ---->What do you mean by this sentence? His nickname is cloud templar. His nickname is [Cloud Templar.] He is the main jungler(position) in CJ Entus Frost. He is the main [jungler (position) for] CJ Entus Frost. He is my mom's cousin. [Correct!] I'm kind of proud. [Correct!] Actually he was in not good mood nowadays. [Actually,] he [is not in] good mood nowadays. But Finally, he did such a great job last game which happened yesterday. [However, he finally] did such a great job last game which happened yesterday. It was the 3rd set which is the last set. It was the 3rd set which [was] the last set. The enemy KT Bullets, They took the 1st set, but Frost took 2,3rd set. The [opponent, KT Bullets, took the 1st set, but Frost took the second and third] set. I was so happy. [Correct!] Almost every people were saying good thing about Madlife(anothe player-supporter), Cloud templar(jungler) Shy( another Player -top). Almost [everyone was] saying good [things] about [MadLife (anothe player-supporter),] Cloud [Templar (jungler) and] Shy ( another player-top.) Notes: 1. Please observe proper word choices. 2. Always remember to use capital letters to start a proper noun. Hi Stiven! Thank you for sharing ^^ Happy weekend! - Teacher Tracy