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Animals
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1. Do you want to learn juggling? Why or why not? 2. What can you do to help Afghan children? 3. Do you like to study math? Why or why not? After I read this article, those circus boys gave me great effect to me. What can I do for Afghanistan kids? Circus boys volunteer for them. I have more things than them. God gave me much things than them, and he wants me to share things. What can I give to them? Maybe I can give some money or necessaries. Or I can share my aptitude with them. I can study more math - my favorite subject - and I can teach them. Teacher! Sorry... I wasn't at home when you called me today. I watched a musical with my family and on the way back home, you called me...(On the subway) And please check my grammitical mistakes in my diary. Thank you. See you tomorrow!
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Hello there, Annie!^^* Oh, you were on your way home when I called you yesterday that's why it was noisy. Anyway, don't you worry because I understand now.^^* Moreover, I agree with you. Let's try to find simple ways on how we can help those children in Afghanistan.^^* I'll talk to you later in class, Annie!^^* -=CORRECTIONS=- After I read this article, those circus boys gave me great effect to me. = After I read this article, it brought a great effect on me. (correct usage of expressions) What can I do for Afghanistan kids? = Good! Circus boys volunteer for them. = Some children volunteered for them. (correct usage: noun) I have more things than them. = Right! God gave me much things than them, and he wants me to share things. = God gave me a lot of things compared to them. So He wants me to share it with them. (correct usage of expressions) What can I give to them? = Correct! Maybe I can give some money or necessaries. = Maybe I can give some money or basic necessities. (correct usage: noun) Or I can share my aptitude with them. = I can also share them some of my knowledge. (correct usage of expressions) I can study more math - my favorite subject - and I can teach them. = I can study Math more, which is my favorite subject, and I can also teach them about it. (correct usage of expressions) Teacher! Sorry... = Teacher, I'm sorry. (correct usage: punctuation mark) I wasn't at home when you called me today. = I understand. I watched a musical with my family and on the way back home, you called me...(On the subway) = I watched a musical with my family and you called me while we were on our way home. (correct usage of expressions) And please check my grammitical mistakes in my diary. = And please check my grammatical mistakes in my diary. (correct spelling: grammitical = grammatical) Thank you. = You're welcome!^^* See you tomorrow! = See you later, Annie!^^* Have a nice day, Annie!^^*